Good melody and lyrics. The strumming an singing is sounding really strong.

great lines and strong visuals-the title and key theme is very effective.

This is really well put together, Tamara. Great hook in the chorus, and the bridge really stands out from the rest of the song without being too different. And the melody and lyrics flow together nicely.

Oooh, those vocals are coming through nice and strong, Tamora! I remember this one - I like this version of it very much!

I love the clarity in the lyrics and memorable progression in the chords and melody.

So... I think this is the final version of this song.  Chords and melody are different than the last version.  

Been working on it for a couple months, so perhaps it doesn't qualify as a SAW submission -- but it is because of SAW that this song exists.  Enjoy!

Jumping Through Hoops

Slinky dress I wear
Spend money on hair
Just to be who you desire
I can’t speak my mind
When you waste my time
Then call my friend a liar
And all these games tire me

I’m not jumping through hoops for you
First you promise my dreams come true
Then you make me look like a fool
I’m not jumping through hoops for you

I was broken down
Then you came around
And helped me through the fire
I was hooked again
Then you left on a whim
To someone who jumps higher
And how can I admire you

I’m not jumping through hoops for you
First you promise my dreams come true
Then you make me look like a fool
I’m not jumping through hoops for you

So many say they were lost the same way
Running ‘round in loops
There’s no easy way out, sometimes you have to shout
Way up high on the roof

I’m not jumping through hoops for you
First you promise my dreams come true
Then you make me look like a fool
I’m not jumping through hoops for you

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