Voice is good.  Singing is a bit bland and hard to make out lyrics, but everything else sounds great

our freezing tides meet for the last time
contort until we're blind
within me the mystery dies
breathe in new life
your light is running out

grey eyelids

Many thanks to Mephisto Waltz for letting me work with him and being such cool dudes.
@mephisto_waltz

Mephisto Waltz/Nkujarks - eczemic planar dissolve

thank u for being here💛💜💚
i had to make something horrible💛💜💚
lyrics
this beat is ass who made it
i don't got an ic3 pick let that bitch spray
really sorry to ruin the feng shui
it is kinda loud can't hear what you say
got a 100 couches but no pda
l to a pd cause i get away
no i do not draw i need to get paid paint i know i'm lame
had on a first date give him to first aid
i just lost a penny need some gatorade
you're a chainsaw and i'm a bladee
which means i can be hidden by a lady
while she's in stock exchange doing some trading
just threaten a bro already bomb
invest in art
how do you know it's true love? do do do
how do you know i miss you
do you know i miss you?
if i wanna keep the kids flying
keep my head down
i want sugar like an ostrich gotta keep my head down
got a little guillotine to study and relax to
20 dix 20 six gotta keep my head down
like tyrannosaurus i get racks did you know
i mean racks like inri pretty bitch like gimli
how do you know it's true love? do you know?
how do you know i miss you
do you know i miss you?
i don't know nothing about it i don't know nothing about the train
i cannot go leave without it i'm getting infinite amulets
just like 1960's comic your girl in my fridge like defrosting ic3 queen
and she is talking about rockets cause it is the only science we can see

Noic3 Pick Qwe

270922
https://faktor4.bandcamp.com/album/modern-nature

Modern Nature 3

Wait for me 2

main @starav
label @nondescriptmusicgroup

Reuploaded for the second time, something I made before the release of The End.

The Beginning Of

fever

FADE IN [or ECHOES OF SILENCE?]:

INT. THEATRE - NIGHT [or DARK ENSEMBLE?]

The curtains slowly rise on the blank stage, revealing an enigmatic presence fixed in a trance-like state. Emerging gradually from the shadows, the unidentified figure initiates their art with an opening chord. Instantly, the atmosphere is transformed with a velvet-black ambiance [or twilight abyss?] and a mysterious glow that seems to swirl and dance in the background [1].

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AN INTRICATE TAPESTRY OF VERNACULAR [or LANGUAGE LABYRINTH?]

We hear a cacophony of colliding sounds and reverberations, accompanied by a palpable intensity that fills the chamber. The camera pans across the chaos of cross-talking and crests and troughs as the music ebbs and flows, before settling on a serenely secret scintilla of spliced synesthesia that emerges from the pandemonium [2]. A suggestive sprightly spillage of entwined euphony ignites the air with an escalating fervor as the music hums and hastens, with rogue and ruse rippling in a raft of rabble [3].

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A SYMPHONY OF CHUCKLES AND CHISELS [or LAUGHTER AND LITERARY LINES?]

A deliriously dissonant chaos of cloverleaf cloistering, a melodious medley of sparks and embers that arise and swirl with each crescendo [4]. We hear the enigmatic energy taking form, bewildering and befuddling with its bold babbling. It blurs and then burgeons into a symphony of chuckles and chisels, each sculpting and savoring its way into a sonic sensuality [5].

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A BIZARRELY BEGUILING VISTA [or ENCHANTING EERIE LANDSCAPE?]

The journey winds through a warbling world, whirling through wryness, whimsy, and wit before finally delivering us to a bizarrely beguiling vista [6]. The camera lingers on this strange and foreign place, capturing its surreal and disorienting beauty [7].

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INT. THEATRE - NIGHT (LATER) [or REVERBERATING RUINS?]

The enigmatic figure is now in full view of the camera, but their identity is obscured by the atmospheric distortion that now fills the room [8]. The music has reached a frenzied crescendo, and the camera shakes and shudders with the vibrations [9]. Suddenly, there is a loud crash, and the figure disappears from view.

CUT TO:

INT. THEATRE - NIGHT (MOMENTS LATER) [or POST-APOCALYPTIC AFTERMATH?]

The music has stopped, and the atmosphere is beginning to clear [10]. The camera pans across the stage, revealing a scene of chaos and destruction. The unidentified figure is lying on the ground, their instrument shattered into pieces.

DIRECTOR (off-screen)
Cut! Cut! What the hell was that?

CAMERAMAN (off-screen)
I don't know, man. It just went to hell.

DIRECTOR (off-screen)
We can't use any of this. We need to reshoot the whole thing.

CUT TO:

INT. THEATRE - DAY (NEXT DAY) [or MORNING MOURNFULNESS?]

The curtains rise once again, and the enigmatic figure initiates their art anew. This time, the music is slow and mournful, and the camera focuses on the shattered remains of the instrument on the ground [11]. As the music continues, we see the figure begin to piece a campfire from the broken fragments of their creation [12].

CUT TO:

A GENTLE FADE OUT [or THE FINAL NOTE?]

As the music fades to silence, the curtains slowly close, and the camera lingers on the crackle of the [1].

[1] Flames? Or more of an ethereal light?
[2] Maybe a more specific example of the synesthesia? Or focus on the harmony?
[3] Consider simplifying this sentence - too much alliteration?
[4] Sparks and embers seem repetitive - change one?
[5] "Salivating" could be "savoring"?
[6] Mention specific visuals?
[7] How can we show this beauty? What does it look like?

[9] What if the camera's shake is more subtle?
[10] Could the smoke clear to reveal a specific image/message?

[13] Does the guitar need to play a significant role throughout?

https://www.youtube.com/shorts/KbHTR5DusbM

‘˘ •Øö Oπ°∑ø˚'¨

𝚁𝙸𝙲𝙾𝙲𝙷𝙴𝚃!

夜の隅

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im also on the other screaming sites but i dont have links to those

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