I think that high guitar part should be brought out a little more. The notes you chose there are nice, but I think the tone should be less agressive, maybe a little bit of gain might help with that. The vocals feel a bit drowned out too, I know it's shoegaze and all, but i don't think it'd hurt to bring them up just a bit. The last part is awesome, wow. It's just that the lead guitar is too low, that part is important! Overall, I think it's a good track. Nice writing.

i like the melody of this song and the drowned vocals gives a cool ambiant feeling.

What effect do you use to have that very long sustain on the distorted chords in the background? Nice track!

DISSOLVER. Album #2 is out now!

http://voicesfromdeepbelow.bandcamp.com/album/dissolver

Stream: http://youtu.be/lbxiERL0Xek

Recorded between October 2013 and April 2014.

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