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use these first bars of melody for a loop. Use loop in intro…

Add another rim/wood, but dubby.

Add percussive groove. Use random or sample to start with.

Try snappier 2nd hat (or rim)

More prominent piano.

Add textured percussion.

Try more dly/rvb on rimshot.

Try more monotonous lead. Try the low key first.

Add white noise percussive texture.

Add some texture