Comments

The background percussion could be more foregrounded?

shorten the break

remove first 1-2 minutes

ending from around 10:00 sounds like another version!

bleep here + remove all but three first hats

did a lot of things on the list

check the kick - to high level? Also try it with a 'tronic' …

end the track a little sooner and make the ending more loop-…

re-introduce 3rd bar hh here

check "rubber ball" sound. Remove?