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Only three more things: 1) fill in the gaps where amp-noise …

Wait with kick/bass longer

Fixed the piano. Now: 1) strings come in too loud near middl…

Like a record baby right round round

Try softer (by a lot) piano

Den här låten kom till när jag helt enkelt monterade in nano…

All the sounds have hurt feelings and complain a lot about a…

Piano needs to be more subtle here

Try more percussion, quirky electronica style.

Try cutting parts, making it shorter. (after the piano thing…