could you guys listen to my first song and help me understand what i need to do better for the future?

yooo if yall fw beats like dis check out my song i js made promise its worth ur time

xav may have carried but nett still wa hard

u told us quit w yungsterjack

osamason - yes me (xaviersobased)

credits: https://soundcloud.com/xaviersobased https://soundcloud.com/xaviersobased/crisp-dubs-xaviersobased

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