A very cool track! I really like the composition; the mix is a bit too bright IMO and it could use more movement (modulation and automation), but for a first entry this is great!

a sweet composition and nice synth sounds. I don't like the mix though. those lead sounds dont need to be that loud or present. and I'd make that fizzy bass wider in the stereo field myself. just ideas.

Good start but for me it feel a bit too straight and needs to loosen up a bit. Maybe add a filter that opens up a bit or a gate  or something.

Just a bit bright, knocking a little hi end off would make the listening experience somewhat better.

The nice clear arps at the start seem to lose their appeal once the other parts join in (IMO of course!).

the arps sound louder than the melody to me - feels like it needs a re-balance.

ehhhh.,... I really liked that square wave melody and the counterpoints, but this feels kind of mushy after that.

I think you have really good ideas, and a very nice sense of melody, but the production needs some love.

I love the melody here. I wish the drums would hit a bit harder at least for my tastes.

Bleass Monolit Synth song for KVR ONE SYNTH CHALLENGE!! 

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