Excellent job finding a gentleness to the synth.

Nice background dissonance over the chord progression.

My only complaint is I wanted more of everything!

Those are very nice pads -- warm for B:M.

I like the arps but I would prefer them further back -- adding spice - not being prominent.  So I think mix could be a little more balanced.

The panning toms sound too lo-fi/digital for the rest of the lovely organic soundscape!

Feels like the first half, would be nice to have more!

You have these nice intermediate sections; would be nice to extend the piece to combine them more with the intro/outro groove.

Quite frankly, despite some encouragement, I don't really want to update this song, even with other vsti. I don't like it very much:-((((. Only the first minute seems to me exploitable. To be continued (or not ;-)) Thank you for your feedback.

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