honestly it's a little messy harmonically, and even though the pumping is "active" I felt like the kick (and the beat overall) wasn't nearly as powerful as I needed it to be. Nice breakdown and some good sounding claps!

I'm sorry for writing this, but at some point the bass is out of key, but the melody and sounds are nice.

Some nice ear candy over the steady beat. I agree that the bass is bending in strange ways in parts. Good energy.

Nice work !   this has a very positive vibe to it. And I think your music⁫ is getting significantly better. Beter flow, better color, better variation.  More deliberate.  I definitely enjoyed this one. Btw, any dissonace seems confined to the wide background wash, and imo doesn't really distract from the feel and flow of the piece. Didn't bother me at all, really.

I think you have most of the elements, but it could all use some editing. 1st the choice of bass notes, maybe practice by playing basslines over songs you like?  2nd keep tweaking the mix, check levels in mono and at different volumes, and EQ/compress until it sounds like a record.  It's just a matter of practice.

Nice gated Pad here :) Also I really like the name of your track :P

I like the overall mood. It lacks dynamics and direction, in my opinion. There are some quality ideas here though.

this is a promising start -- let's see where it goes!

your ending is good - a change-up.  the middle kind of lacks, sorry.

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