D'aww, why interrupting it there, with that nice sideral reverb? It's like the track could've potentially got in interesting places starting from there, maybe with a minute/minute and a half of more running time. But the choice is yours, so I respect that :) The melodies you went for in fact are nice and the swinging bass really drives the song, so I can say I really like it!

Nice lolloping bass/groove, almost begging for some swing

A bit short for my taste, and the lead is quite screechy as commented already.  Would be nice to have it develop more.

Not really bad, perhaps a little too short. The lead sound is a bit too sharp or too loud. All in all quite ok, even if I think you can do much better. Your contribution to the Surge synth, for example, was really really good!

Kind of solid Drums and Bass, but in between Drums plus Bass and the very high melody there's missing "something"

Wha not give the Chords a little bit more rhythmical interest by using "Tresillo" pattern, or adding a automated MTremolo? Just thinking loud

This does not feel like a finished instrumental song to me.  There are very good elements - the galloping bass, the direction of the sound palette, the melody, but I think you need to deconstruct it, figure out what you could do to make it a little more interesting, fix some of the sonic issues and give it an overall production pass.  All that being said, there is a lot of good here so keep working at it.

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hope u enjoy!

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