Please let me know what i should do to improve! All criticism is welcome! i know at the end the audio got fucked up, thats because i ran into issues with the mic. i released this prematurely because im excited to share a page out of my note book, hope yall like it!

Rants

Maybe Too Much

chorus
(I been smoking green for a week now im sleepy 
Shorty is a fiend popped a bean wants to eat me 
Promethazine what she really wants to feed me 
Told her i love drugs she just really wants to please me 
I been smoking green for a week now im sleepy 
Shorty is a fiend popped a bean wants to eat me 
Promethazine what she really wants to feed me 
Told her i love drugs she just really wants to please me )
Verse 1
Told her i love drugs i just love it that she needs me 
Believe me its cheesy like my fuckin wallet 
Im ballin im gambling all in i bust me an ollie and im never falling 
Im capping sitting back relaxing im askin what the fuck just happend im stoned yeah im blasted to you this blunt im passin not like past tense but i got bands like elastic 
And i got friends that are plastic (fake)
(chorus)
Verse 2
Just released some music that shes peeping and eating 
Up im just leaving and peacing 
out while im breathing this heat and i don't know
Why im just leading a fleet of these people believing addiction i am beating
but i keep on cheefing on this fucking green green
yeah the reefer yeah i deter 
anyone to meet her
im talking bout mary jane cus youll get what you deserve
(chorus)
Verse 3
Got bad habits im an addict drugs i have em automatic not stick shift when im driften homies pissin tunes we listening packs and birds we flippin all the curbs we hittin all the words we spitting and nothin is writin its not in the stone its all in the dome like memory foam until i smoke a cone which is often yeah my brain is rotten im roaming the whole world in my coffin 
 (chorus)
If you want to please me just get me a peace tea some sticky icky leafy and leave me 
Im beastly oh you got me one joint well imma need three im already high i just cover up discreetly
i treat people how they wanna treat me 
They say
“wow your short” when they meet me 
they livin cheaply 
they  Living life on easy 
They be livin calm while i live life extremely

Please Me

I’m an 18 year old Canadian with a passion for writing lyrics and making music. I’ve been writing lyrics and making songs since 2018 but didn’t release them for good reason. “Rants” was a spontaneous decision to release but I felt it was a great point to start from given how much I’ve improved lyrically over the years. I release music for my own sake, to see how much I can improve as an artist and just as a way to express myself. 
I’m happy to be on this journey to find my sound and find similar minds along the way. 
-A Gremlin

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