Your vocals are amazing, very smooth, clearer and beautiful.

Wonderful instrumental part here, I felt some hope, encouragement and energy given to us. Great ending and composition for this sad and beautiful song!

Did you play the piano? Very beautiful and impressive play throughout the track.

Outstanding work on the lyrics, vocal and piano, Eric!

WOW awesome work, I have been waiting for your new song! Profound lyrics and great vocals. Sad , beautiful melody and sounds✨✨✨✨✨💎💎💎✨✨✨✨✨🥹

Such a great arrangement Eric. Excellent lyrics and a quality vocal delivery. A top song in fact.



Lyrics: 
Its seems that fate has crossed our paths again, the one I did offend, no chance to make amends
Benevolence and smiles are all pretend , in light of ill intent , just attempts to make amends 

All of us are hopeless sinners some are losers some are winners
Straining or found resting by the plow

Waiting and anticipating a trophy for participating 
In a game that started long ago, so long ago

The memories  like ice  flood in my mind, but the eye that sees is blind, and  truth becomes denied.
when light shines brighter than the  day , and we turn our look away ,  we continue in the maze

Some of us are lost forever misguided in our endeavors
Choked out by the thistles and the thorns

Lying still in total silence contemplating scenes of violence
Amending for what happened long ago, so long ago


Winegeomor

First, I would like to say thank you for reading this. That means that you liked my songs enough to see what I’m about. That means a lot to me.
I’m a working man and a family man. The years digging ditches and breaking my back to put food on the table, has given me enough ammo to write a song or two. I like to write songs about real life with all of its struggles, beauty and grit…

In this digital age of perfect music I'm trying to leave the human imperfections in the tracks. Most parts are done straight through with no splices. A missed note or chord here or there, bit out of time...trying to keep it raw. Maybe I go too far sometimes?

I don't play games on SoundCloud. If I like your music ill like it and follow you. I wont unfollow you even if you don't follow me back!  If you do I'll be delighted though!

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