I'll master your song with unlimited reviews until you're happy,give feedback, and follow/support you on social media for $15US on fiverr (link below). 
The first thing I did with the guitar I got at 15 was write a song what else. I'm still doing it as an old guy.

Five dickheads from Melbourne's real Wild West.
Best enjoyed with a hot dart in one hand and a cold one in the other.

Hard rocking locals need no introduction to “This is SpudGun” (declared proudly on stage-hoisted banners). 
A cheeky crew of energetic berserkers that simply lay waste to every stage they face. 
Heavy, bluesy, groovy and above all: ANTHEMIC! With tight chops and catchy songs in the vein of AC/DC and Twisted Sister, they deliver an onslaught of grimy bass, crystal clear sludgy guitars and tight industrious drumming that creates the time-proven party atmosphere necessary to get people singing along, stage-diving, moshing and drinking at the bar. 
If you need to scream, let loose and rock out; this is the band to see. 
They’ll have you chanting and head banging to every song. This is definitely NOT a live show to miss.

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