Good instruments, but it honestly sounds too slow and washed out. Dissonance can be effective when intentional or abrupt, but it's hard to listen to at times. Good luck though!

“I see the crystal raindrops fall...”

The middle section is falling apart and I think that's on purpose... But still makes for a tough listen.

I think this is a fantastic piece!  Such a big leap in quality - great to hear.  I love how the sweet song gets tangled up with with the dissonance.  Brave and disorientating.  One of the most interesting songs this round.  Keep at it.  I hope you do well.

the harmony is very nice for me, but I don't like those sounds that reminds me of the Roland synths of the 80s

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