Came from Reddit Indie Music feedback post. I hear good stuff here. Right where song needed a change, chorus kicked in. I'd maybe work on the guitar - the strumming gets a bit monotonous. Just a suggestion, Good stuff.

Oh I had the strangest dream.
The strangest dream... 

...Oh I had the strangest dream.

Hmmm do you smell something burning?
      (No. You're shivering, are you cold?)
Mmmhmm, I am.
So what was this dream?
      (I can't explain it) 

Hehe, you okay honey? 
      (Yes, I guess so. It's the strangest thing)...
You okay honey?...
       (You just asked me that!)
You okay honey?
       (Why do you keep saying that!?)
Saying what?
       (You keep asking me if I'm okay!)
I only said it once.
       (...no, you said it three times) 

Hehe, here.. I think you need this.
A toast... To our new house, my raise, and this beautiful & gorgeous day... 

...Nice snooze? 
        (Huh? No. Oh I had the strangest dream..) 

It's the strangest thing.


Somnium

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Hello,
here is a very calm music track for you, good for dream, relaxing and bringing new thoughts.
It's also a preview of my next album.
All the best!
C.J.Rogers

CJR-Music originals | more info also here:  https://www.cjrogersmusic.com

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Do You Love Me
I wrote this song back in early December.  I have sat on it since then trying to decide if I liked it enough to publish it.  I am still not sure if it deserves the light of day.  I like the chorus.  But the verse doesn't have the quality feel I desire.  Let me know.  Should I have tossed this song?

Lyrics:  Do You Love Me

Intro:
Do You Love Me

Verse 1:
You loved me once
I was not a dunce
And I still love you
And I am not blue

Sometimes I have my doubts
Days with ins and out
But maybe it’s all me
Trying not to flee

Chorus:
I am a small man
And I have my clan

Verse 2:
I am not a leader
But I am a good breeder
Just a regular guy
Who will look you in the eye

Living a normal life
With you I hope my wife
Full of insecurity
Nothing is a surety

Verse 3:
I have some confidence 
I can hold a conference
All mixed together
Sometimes light like a feather

Not sure where I stand
But when called, I can command
I can lead those in need
and help those who need freed

Outro:
Do You Love Me

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