Rien à dire. texte, compo et arrangements se complètent parfaitement. Peut-être faire un mix plus agressif.

🎵 Quelle composition puissante et émouvante sur un sujet si difficile! ✨ La façon dont tu as capturé la complexité des émotions et des regrets est remarquable 💔 Les paroles sont d'une sincérité bouleversante 🎤 La mélodie souligne parfaitement la gravité du message 🌟 C'est courageux d'aborder ce thème des violences conjugales avec tant de sensibilité 💫 La progression de l'histoire, des souvenirs heureux à la terrible réalité, est magistralement écrite 🎹 Une œuvre importante qui fait réfléchir 🗣️ Bravo pour avoir donné une voix à ce sujet si délicat! ❤️‍🩹​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​

French pop at it's very best! Je Kiffe! Brilliant! <3

Oh this is so good!!! Such awesome voice and attractive progressions.

nice vibe on this one! -- are the horns electronic or live?

Weekly Wave

*Please note that the unfortunate soul portrayed here is completely fictional and is a depiction of nobody in particular.  More accurately a hybrid of individuals encountered or observed.
Enjoy:)

All rights reserved august 12, 2023

Tequila
He takes a sip and lets it gnaw
On dreams that never will take form
He's slippin' away

Morning light
The new day ends another night
Of nothing but another fight
That takes him away

He never knows the plans he should make
Or chances that his heart wants to take
He's heard it all before 
But not anymore
It's slippn' away

No reply
His efforts never get him by
So baby don't you even try
He's slippn' away

Sweet Charlotte
He gives it everything he's got
Then orders them another shot
She turns him away

He never knows the plans he should make
Or chances that his heart wants to take
He's heard it all before 
But not anymore
It's driftin’ away

Albatross 
It's like a train you can't get off
He's sees the stop but not the cost
Of slippin’ away

Slippin' Away

Project RESIDUE (As the Crow Flies)

Old track i pulled, and plan on revising soon.

Mime

BLUR OBJETIVE

Composition created in December 2022 and published in July 2024.

I finally decided to publish it, after almost two years, although I composed it for a guitarist who did not finally accept the collaboration.

I simulated a guitar with the options that my programs and my iPad give me and I thought I could offer something motivating.... but I couldn't.

Even so, I am not dissatisfied with the result and that is why I share it.

Cover art bt Gerd Altmann ( Pixabay)

17 MS2 tracks
1 Korg IM1 track
1 Arturia imini Track.
Hardware. ipad
DAW Music Studio 2
mix. my car. 🚘

Great summer to everyone.

Paco.

Blur Objetive

Il n'est pas facile d'écrire sur les violences conjugales. J'ai pris le parti dans ce texte d'être dans la peau de l'auteur qui agit pour la première fois sur sa compagne et qui, dans un processus de séparation se rend compte qu'il a tout perdu.

It's not easy to write about domestic violence. In this text, I decided to put myself in the shoes of the author who, for the first time, acts on his partner and, in the process of separating, realizes that he has lost everything.

Date de publication : 16 août 2024 🎶
2024 ✨6Carfeli6🤟

Paroles :
[Verse 1]
C’est encore moi, je sais, j’n’dois plus t’appeler.
Je suis tombé sur ton pull, celui que tu adorais.
Je me suis dit que tu aimerais le récupérer
A moins, je comprends, que tu préfères le donner.
Il porte encore ton odeur et ton parfum préféré
Il est toujours aussi doux, comme l’est ta peau
Je me suis endormi avec lui et j’ai rêvé 
Je t’ai fait l’amour et je n’ai rien oublié.

[Chorus]
Tu m'manques chaque jour, mon amour
Je ne t’ferai plus de grand discours
Il n’est pas trop tard pour faire demi-tour
Reprendre notre vie que je te savoure ;
Tu m'manques chaque jour, mon amour
Je sais bien qu’il n’y a plus de recours
Il n’est pas trop tard pour faire demi-tour
Reprendre notre vie que je te savoure ;

[Verse 2] 
Je sais je n’ai pas été correcte, abjecte
Je n’ai pas su battre en retraite, je regrette
Les coups sont partis, j’n’sais pas c’qui m’a pris ;
Je vois encore le sang, sur ta tête.
Je t’ai frappé et je t’ai sauvé, le mal est fait
Toutes les idées se bousculaient dans ma tête
Et toi, tu criais, que tu voulais être libérée
Et moi, je voulais juste que tout s’arrête.

[Chorus]
Tu m'manques chaque jour, mon amour
Je ne t’ferai plus de grand discours
Il n’est pas trop tard pour faire demi-tour
Reprendre notre vie que je te savoure ;
Tu m'manques chaque jour, mon amour
Je sens que ça devient lourd ;
Il n’est pas trop tard pour faire demi-tour
Reprendre notre vie que je te savoure ;

[Verse 3]
J’ai vu mon avocat, je vais prendre cher :
Juste une seule fois et j’me retrouve en enfer.
Tu te souviens, nos sourires, le premier jour ;
Notre rencontre, un après-midi, sur un banc ;
Je t’ai parlé de la zic de Youssou n’Dour ;
Et toi, des livres de Françoise Sagan ;
On a parlé de passions pour les arts ;
Et on a même écouté du Mozart.

[Chorus]
Tu m'manques chaque jour, mon amour
Je ne t’ferai plus de grand discours
Il n’est pas trop tard pour faire demi-tour
Reprendre notre vie que je te savoure ;
Tu m'manques chaque jour, mon amour
Plus de guerre entre nous, c’est trop lourd  
Il n’est pas trop tard pour faire demi-tour
Reprendre notre vie que je te savoure ;

[Verse 4]
Je me souviens la première fois, dans tes bras ;
Tu t’es moquée car j’hésitais à t’embrasser ;
Tu as pris les devants, douce comme à chaque fois ;
Et nos corps se sont mêlés, durant plusieurs années ;
Et les habitudes installées, t’ont vite blasée ;
Pas assez de mondanités, tu t’es révoltée ;
Je voyais bien que tu t’ennuyais, tu fuyais ;
J’ai pris tes clés, je les ai jetés et tout à commencer ;

[Chorus]
Tu m'manques chaque jour, mon amour
Je ne t’ferai plus de grand discours, plus d’recours
Il est trop tard pour faire demi-tour
Reprendre notre vie que je te savoure ;
Tu m'manques chaque jour, sans détour
Je le crains, Je ne t’ferai plus l’amour
Il est trop tard pour faire demi-tour
Je crois que je suis devenu sourd ;

Juste Une Seule Fois...

Oceans acoustic cover (vocals//Teresia-Lee)

Lyrics:

(Chorus)
Extra ordinary—-holler if you hear me 
Cause Anything goes—-Anything goes
Ask Jane ———-first name Mary
Fact—— fiction ———or theory
Yeah——Anything goes—-Anything goes

Anything goes with the beat and the rhythm 
don’t worry about the verses ——got ya ——gonna kill em
extra ordinary ——-level up when you——hear me 
a new dish in the menu——
like DoorDash—- I’ll bring you 
——-different flavors——-different styles——
Keep it versatile 

Negative vibe——no——never 
jamming to the groove——
a routine endeavor
Beatz bumping—— fist pumping 
they all want more ——give it up, still on top
I’ve got that high score ———————-
I’ve got that high score 

energy and focus makes me the Dopest ——
I’m not bragging ——but hope you know this 
:adds to my opus 
———-this adds to my opus 

the plan relentless make more and spend less 
that’s part ———-of my checklist—-
dividing my——-check less
bottom line ——specialist 
who can —-contest this ——
taste with ———a fresh twist
delivering ——-pure freshness—- 
told you—— don’t stress this 
level up ———to —-the—A-list ———
momentum———- contagious

Straight to the top, no time to delay
Let your body rock, got my mind on replay
Building empires, from rhymes to paper
Every bar a brick———-, and I’m stacking skyscrapers

Always hustling——always hustling 
the grind never cease
Flow so cold———-like a winter breeze

Never on the sideline———gold standard —brilliance
Sip it down —like fine wine——perfecting my resilience
Get yours ——-I’ll get mine—-beats in my veins
Riding high naturally——has always ——-been the aim, 
And ain’t no stopping ———And ain’t no stopping
—————Stopping these gains

***To the top!

Negative vibe——no——never 
jamming to the groove——
a routine endeavor
Beatz bumping—— fist pumping 
they all want more ——give it up, still on top
I’ve got that high score ———————-
I’ve got that high score

Anything Goes

ILP-Conscious Entity Sound - New Babylon Remix
@Conscious Entity Sound // Vocals and Lyrics
https://www.looperman.com/acapellas/detail/10254/ilp-new-babylon-wet-vox-80bpm-hip-hop-acapella
https://soundcloud.com/consciousentitysound
Original Link: https://gate.sc/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DVJbhHxNbFxI&token=b5a4a8-1-1727107360885
@Paploviante // Musik, E Bass, Mix and Artwork
Lyrics:
Picture for a minute the possibility
Livin' n' givin' n' winnin' n' gettin' so free
Witness beginnings and endings n' lettin' thangs be
Let the evil of humanity plunge deep in the sea
Get the noose let it wither away
And today you n' I both know what to say
In the face of destruction that's life reduction
It has only solely one function
Target and attack wack devil on a horseback
Bout to get God-smacked yea how ya like that
Well let the Good Lord carry on
Yea bout' to crush New Babylon
And every hidden thangs gonna be flipped around
From the top of the world to the underground
Yes and there will be justice
That's the word you can trust this
Chorus 2x
Every man has his day everythang flips around
If you look hard enough there's some truth to be found
If you're on another level then you know what I say
You're eternally alive, others fade away
Verse 2
Picture for a minute the insanity
The depth of calamity coupled with vanity
Lost in a selfie sea ain't nobody helpin' me
That's the way it's gotta be gotta seek deep relief
And I find it right here
Find on the inside that my mind gets live
I ain't never gotta hide only hold it down n' ride
Seein' God pick a side pick a fight wrong or right
Forget the hype flashy lights fake people not my type
Got a team and we're tight ILP yea that's right
Another dope track we know you feel that
Put your fist in the air time to hit back
Cuz every hidden thangs gonna be flipped around
From the top of the world to the underground
Yes and there will be justice
That's the word you can trust this
Chorus 2x
Every man has his day everythang flips around
If you look hard enough there's some truth to be found
If you're on another level then you know what I say
You're eternally alive, others fade away

ILP - Conscious Entity Sound - New Babylon Remix

Additional sound design: Kenny Dyer [ https://soundcloud.com/kenny_dyer ]
Music, lyrics & vocals: Andersson Arte (Marty Andersson) [ https://andersson-arte.com ]

Kindle eBook [ https://www.amazon.com.au/Unadulterated-Thought-Mechanism-Andersson-Arte-ebook/dp/B0DBP4WJL7 ]

Marty Andersson: Victim of Love (Ver. 2.1, feat. Kenny Dyer)

Astrarium

Nephogram

Original track. Dean on all vocals and guitars. 

LYRICS 
All he needed was to see her again
But he got carried away 
Tried to find out who were her best friends 
But he got carried away 
Had to know if she was all fine 
But he got carried away 
Called her cellphone 98 times!
Then he was carried away... 

...to a room where everything's white 
No windows to let in the light 
Padded walls and double deadlocks 
Medication and electric shocks!

He don't wanna live this misery 
Can't accept that they weren't meant to be
Gotta break out of captivity 
Before they schedule his lobotomy 

All he wanted was to see her smile 
But he got carried away 
Only sat outside her house for a while 
But he got carried away 
Used a tracker to see where she's been 
But he got carried away 
He doesn't know why the cops were so mean
When he was carried away...

...to a room where everything's white 
No windows to let in the light 
Padded walls and double deadlocks 
Medication and electric shocks!

He don't wanna live this misery 
Can't accept that they weren't meant to be
Gotta break out of captivity 
Before they schedule his lobotomy 
He don't wanna live this misery 
Trapped inside his fantasy
Just a menace to society 
He ain't the same as you and me!

Carried Away

This was actually my debut song on Soundcloud when I joined in 2018 (already removed few years ago to make room).  In its place, here is a collaborated version with the help from a few friends in England.
Once again, the wonderful lyrics by Mellina Barnett who also wrote the lyrics   for my last track "Lattice Window".

Hope you enjoy the song and thanks for stopping by.

[CREDITS]
Vocal - Leonna Barnes
Music / Programming - Michael C.  Lynn
Lyrics - Mellina Barnett
Guitar Solo - John Barnes

[LYRICS]
The stars guide our way back home
As we trip across life like stepping stones
Feel the warmth from your body

Happy now I am somebody 
You tell me all your hopes and make plans
You smile as I take your hand

These days can slip so easily by
So hold them in when you close your eyes

{CHORUS}
We can brave the sands of time
Together we're strong, we can walk the line
Share with me all your dreams
I’ll keep them safe like a memory
The stepping stones will always lead me back to you
If I wander too far away 
Like our own special path the rough with the smooth

 
It's not long now till we grow old
Always hold me close so we never feel cold
Want to gather life in my arms
Just like an armful of laughter
Throw it around to share in its wonder
Maybe we'd learn to walk slower

These days can slip so easily by
So hold them in when you close your eyes

Repeat Chorus

Unassigned

Stepping Stones (featuring Leonna Barnes)

Good Day (2024) Anthology CD1 Track 09

Apparently according to one experiment I saw... A bee, or the bee in the experiment... beats its wings at a Bb on the 432 scale. That's our key here.

The Bee key. Let's buzz...

Dear SoundCloud

Brave New World (2024) Anthology CD5 Track 03

Thunder Storm and Rain Intro Arturia Pads Omnisphere Strat Electronic pop track. Vocal By HighLife

Moving On

Heavy Punk Rock 'n' Roll band turns into Synthwave nowadays! Brand NEW album "Ultraviolet Cosmos" available NOW!

🎧 🇫🇷 Salut !  
Je compose, j’enregistre, je mixe à la maison pour le plaisir. Chaque morceau me prend 35 à 85 h de passion. Je ne vends pas ma musique -> je la partage. Ma récompense ? Une écoute, un like, un partage 🙏  Musique sans frontière🎵 Paix, Liberté, Créativité ✌️

🎧 🇬🇧 Hi there!  
I compose, record & mix at home, just for the joy of it. Each track takes 35 to 85 hours of passion.  
I don’t sell my music. I share it.  My reward? A listen, a like, a share 🙏   Music without borders  🎵 Peace, Freedom, Creation.✌️

🎧 🇪🇸 ¡Hola!  
Compongo, grabo y mezclo en casa, solo por placer.  Cada tema me lleva entre 35 y 85 horas de pasión.  No vendo mi música, la comparto.  Mi recompensa? Una escucha, un like, un compartir 🙏 
Música sin frontera  🎵 Paz, Libertad, Creación.✌️

Juste Une Seule Fois...

✨6Carfeli6🤟

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