I think you did a good job with the bass and drums. It's a great song, I'd say just bring down the vocals in the mix a bit.

This song is great, just lower the vocals a bit, run them through some compression and maybe add some ambience reverb to them. It could really help glue the whole track together in a better way.

I love the instrumentation, but i would add somme reverb to the vocals

that charlie brown halloween special was so comfy

another great song! I'd just lower the vocals a tiny bit

this song is comfy, makes me search for my blanket

another super rough first draft demo, this time with my first attempt to program drums and a bass (with mixed results).

he’s special
got a graveyard of potential
popping kick flips with the devil’s
not so wrong

ineffectual 
misdirection is perpetual 
like a brainwashed intellectual 
i’m always wrong

i’m wasting time
i killed my soul 
waking up in bars
i don’t know 
burnt inside
by ethanol 
i don’t mind
well I don’t know

empty temple
from the tombs he rises gentle
casting doubt, humming celestial
solar songs 

be careful 
at a crossroads of the sensual
lies a vineyard of potential 
that’s thick and strong
 
i’m wasting time
killed my soul 
waking up in bars
i don’t know 
burnt inside
by ethanol 
i don’t mind
well I don’t know

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Lion Trail

Martin Nilsen

Martin Nilsen

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TAU 84

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