Great songwriting happening here...shame about the deleted verses but completely understand your reasoning.  Superb work.

Love the 60’s retro sound. Your vocals sound HUGE! I am getting a bit of a Beach Boys sound in your instrumentation. LIKED!

That s a very good song with an excellent production :))

Very cool! I love the guitar sound in this song!

Nice and loose.Has a swagger.Such a dreamy tune

Great song! ”It wasn’t as if I was some busy bee then
Pollen falling out of my hair” 
Love that line

You have 2 ir 3 more song's worth of lyrics man.  You're prolific.  Peace. ✌️😑

MIX/MASTER - WOODS STUDIO
https://soundcloud.com/woods_studio

(SCROLL DOWN FOR DELETED VERSES I WROTE IN SOME KIND OF FIT!)

You’ve got me where you want me		
What more can I say
You’ve got me where you want me
I wouldn’t have it any other way

It wasn’t as if I was some busy bee then
Pollen falling out of my hair   
Well I had my share		
Guess I had my share             
But did someone care?                           
Who was there to care?     
My heart grew weary
I told myself “dearie”
A true love is mighty rare


You pulled me out of hiding
You know that you did
You pulled me out of hiding
I admit I wasn’t well hid

I don’t claim that anyone called me reclusive
But no one really came round to check
Was it self neglect
Yeah it was self neglect
What did I expect?
What did I expect?
I couldn’t gain traction
Afraid to take action
You lifted me off the deck

You know what you did
You know what you did
Who you trying to kid
You know what you did

You told me ‘sit and listen’
The lecture was stern
You told me ‘sit and listen’
I know I've lots more to learn 
And then it’s your turn

You know what you did!
Got what you wanted
You know what you did
Who you trying to kid?
You know what you did

DELETED VERSES


You woke me from a slumber
I opened one eye lid
You woke me from a slumber
And then you know what you did

You worked me like field oxen
For my room and board
You worked me like field oxen
We both know whose ox got gored

You paint a pretty picture
Designed to entrance
You paint a pretty picture 
But come on - don’t call this romance 

you tossed me a banana 
said you might need a snack
you tossed me a banana 
an hour later - you wanted it back

you light me like a candle
As evening descends 
you light me like a candle 
Yeah a flame at both ends 
I recognize the message that sends

you rolled me like a barrel 
down a steep hill
you rolled…
i crushed poor jack and jill

You pinned me in the corner
Knocked me back on my heels
You pinned me in the corner
How do I deal with all of the feels?

You played me like a golf course
You know what you’ve done
You played me like golf course
Hope you’re happy with that hole-in-one

You led me to the stable
After a ride I won’t soon forget
You led me to the stable
I was still panting and wet

I struggled with my conscience 
with all my might
I struggled with my conscience 
You know who won that fight

You talked me out of talking
said it’s just between us
You talked me…
But I think they've all seen us

you ruined me for the others
if any might care
you ruined me…
You know they can’t compare

Sexagenarian III

You Know What You Did

NOTICE: I DO NOT PAY FOR PROMOTION. EVER.

SPOTLIGHT: With "Half My Life" and "we get so lonely we could die," Sexagenarian Vol VI now has eleven of its planned 12 tracks. Check out the other five (5!) volumes of Sexagenarian as well. 

BIO: I started writing songs in high school (1969-1973!) and I've pretty much never stopped. These are mostly solo recording projects (my brother, Fog City Fogey, contributes sometimes).  I don't do much self-promotion, not a fan of Repost Exchange etc, so all of you who find this page and like a song or two - you are truly appreciated!

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