An Alternate version of this song that I mixed in GarageBand and added an entirely new drum track with completely different drum kit and effects. I like it but not sure which is the better version.

THE UNTOUCHABLES (Alternate Drum mix)

Middle

how can you program me to stay
you can't get over me this way
weight on my shoulders I can't take
we're getting old and it's too late
you can't control everyone's fate

weight // fate

stating  my opinion
this  wasn’t my decision 
i’d take it all back
if I could
yeah she’s the got the vision
they’ll make the incision 
and I’ll be laying low now for good

no more conversations
if life is what you make 
don’t wanna be misunderstood 
no more vacations
if life is what you make it
then ’ll be laying low now for good

there’s a silver string 
keep on pulling
can’t remember things
when they’re foolin
there’s a part of me 
in the ocean
still feel my body on the shore
i’m not okay anymore
i’m not okay

if I take my life
will I reside here 
in this dark

with my head and my heart
still beating
still believing

laying low // silver string

no one here is nice

time 
is on your side
hide
just run inside
pride
won’t make you right

won't make u right

drano - demo

this is what is happening

brainwashed (tv)

Ball Boy

Thank you so much to Daniel Downing for playing drums,bass,and lead guitar on “Valentine”.

no one here is nice

daniel downing