Better sweet track with excellent lyrics and instrumentation

Lot of emotion packed into that sighy breath

what a delicate intro/outro -- perfect way to bookend this wistful one

there is an art to finding the correct sword-stick with which to battle dream-wyrms -- size is secondary to having a correctly placed knot-hilt, and one must be mindful of the imaginary antagonist when choosing a blade: straight or zig-zag if a brigand-dragon to increase both chance of slipping through scales and catching said scales to rip them free on the back-thrust; lightly curved cutlass when facing a pirate-dragon, to ensure adequate swashbucklery flourish to go along with your cutting japes; and of course bladeless but with swollen pommel to accommdoate the lightsaber needed to dispatch of the common Sith-dragons out there...

incredible development. the flow of lyrics have a incredibly validating and satisfying cadence. loving the bass coming strong near the end to add more of a longing fulfilled.

This is a wonderfully written and performed song!

What a lovely sentiment; nice work good sirs

“Castle Mind”

Run
Through the gardens
Of your mind
A castle guarded
Yet undefined
Your dearest fancies
Your secret friend

Here
Take your sword
It’s just a stick
But vastly more
With a little magic
All your own
You’re on your own
But not alone, never

Life will always be like this
Timeless, charming, childish bliss
Open-hearted mind-soul kiss

Search
The many worlds
That you contain
Imagination whirls
Over it you reign
A fearless knight
A noble, dashing swain

Dash
Shadowed figments
In your mind
The castle’s breached
But unresigned
You’re nearly grown
All up on your own
But not alone, never

Boredom befalls the idle mind
Fruitful soil out of time
Where I myself my self do find

Hold
To your vision
Beyond your walls
Nothing’s what it seems
No not at all
World growing real
Here comes the fall

Grasp
Fading images
From your sleep
Life’s laid you low
Now sleep’s your keep
All on your own
You’re on your own
And so alone, you never...

Imagined life would be like this
A bleak and unforgiving blitz
That cannot be dreamed over

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Music by Corey Ball
Lyrics by August Lysy

Mastered by Spencer Martin

Castle Mind

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A songwriting duo who, after many attempts, has been unable to formulate a bio of just the right amount of sincerity and irony so as to succinctly capture the essence of their musical sensibilities.

See tracks below from our previously released albums:
Songs From Inside a Whale (2022)
Party of Life (2020)
Interesting Times (2019)
Elementary Ego (2018)

**Songs From Inside a Whale | Party of Life --> available on streaming services**

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