Nothing happens without a spark, my friend, and your beautiful, evocative composition hit home so tellingly that everything else was simplicity itself.  Marvellous music and superb production that I'm so very grateful to have been part of.

I had the chance to listen in privilege, this revisited version. The muffled and profound voice, for this admirable text, is perfectly integrated into this piece of music which was waiting for it .... Proof here, that a music can travel, and be embellished during its journey in an excellent way. A great work of mixing that you realized there my Friend .... A very realistic sound image ....

I have already expressed all the good I thought of this collaboration, and I can reiterate it on this page .... Congratulations to you three.

absolutely love this, heard it on Peter's cloud, brilliant work from all of you.

oh man...David always gets that to die for sound with his acoustic

perfect in every way my friends,,and the vocal fits to a T...big fav...well done...Ed

Hi! Peter as got the perfect voice as a narrator. I enjoy his poetry So good collab you re doing with David. All the best to you three😎💚

So cool to hear both versions. Enchanting.

The response to this collaboration around a childhood memory has been fantastic. Obviously many of our listeners have been reminded of their own childhoods and memories have been brought to life.
One of them is "Peter" a very talented poet and songwriter and also a very good friend of David Dunham, and now also to me. ;)
He wrote, a very beautiful poem for our song, so now it is incorporated and we therefore make an updated publication of the song. With his lyrics and reading, Peter has added another dimension to this beautiful warm memory in addition to David's fantastic guitars. ;)

More vivid than this, it is difficult to present a memory. So I thank these talented and cheerful friends for an unforgettable musical journey. ;))

Hear more of Peter's beautiful music here: https://soundcloud.com/user-264930040
Hear more of David Dunham's beautiful music here; https://soundcloud.com/david-dunhamuser589535203

My sanctuary from archive gleans
The gentle times, wherein my mind
Recalls a childhood spent in dreams
Of bobbing boats on ocean spied.

Here, the call of a benevolent sea
The briny, perfumed honesty
Of adolescent memories.

But whence this salty desert sea
Where once the skinny trawler plied?
Plastic water ocean streams
Where finny, swimmy fish should lie.

Silenced of the chuggy motors
Decimated by their quotas
Where the haddock, cod and herring bloaters?

The factory ships that hoovered clean
Of scaly friends the sea main wide.
Its cheaply speckled high protein
Squandered as the herring gull cried.

Where the fishers, where the boats?
Where the nets, and yellow rubber coats?
Where the pots, and lines and corky floats?

...wherein my mind
Recalls a childhood spent in dreams
Of bobbing boats on ocean spied.
Why, they set sail for the past it seems,
Upon tomorrow's ebbing tide.

An updated Childhood Memory With Peter, David D & Seagull

Welcome to my world,  🌍
and a warm thank you to all of you who take your time to listen, comment and like my songs. It is much appreciated !! 😉 🙏🏽

And a huge thank you to all of you who have collaborated with me on many of the songs! 😀 ❤️

Videos are on my YouYube channel  📽

And by the way TERROR, THREAT & WAR NOT ACCEPTED!

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