Amazing! I love your lyrics Greg!Your music gives meaning to life!

A totally extraordinary song. Strange harmonic twists underlining powerful and emotive lyrics. "All we ask is just be kind to us and understand we all will lose"... What on earth was it you originally typed that turned into Carjacked Onesie??? Tom Robinson x

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Walking home with Mary Jane

Out now on Davis' new album "Back to the 80s" - hypeddit.com/v08mjk

108 BPM, Key Am

Lyrics: 
I know ow, you know ow 
That we both going crazy
I want this, you got this, baby
Anything you dream, playing make believe, I'll give you my keys, so you can come with me
So won't you come with me

Cause you're stunning, and you're fine like Jane Fonda 
If you're going, well I'll take you in my Honda
Sure I'm a pretty boy, but dangit you're the best I've ever seen
I searched the world for you, finally I know just Where you been

When I was 3 already knew what I was getting in
I Saw the truth in everything that I was been witnessing
I'm betting you're the one that knows where all my money went
And there begins commencement of my predicament

I wanna place you like a trophy On my centerpiece 
You got my legs moving around like I'm a Centipede
You got my mouth doing things like a Ventrliquist
You got my mind going place can't Get rid of it

So won't you come with me

Cause you're stunning, and you're fine like Jane Fonda 
If you're going, well I'll take you in my Honda
Sure I'm a pretty boy, but dangit you're the best I've ever seen
I searched the world for you, finally I know just Where you been

So one plus one is two
And I am me with you

Cause you're stunning, and you're fine like Jane Fonda 
If you're going, well I'll take you in my Honda
Sure I'm a pretty boy, but dangit you're a perfect Ten
I got my car cleaned for you so won't you come get in
Cause you're stunning, and you're fine like Jane Fonda 
If you're going, well I'll take you in my Honda


Written by Davis Mallory
Produced by Johannes Andersson

Back to the 80s

Jane Fonda

Primitive is the commentary on my personal feelings about the situations, that evoke the urge to change in time. This is a trial of contemplating reality via exploring emotional depths spliting them up into primitive chunks, something basic and primal for a brighter self-clarification to prepare to move on.

Primitive

Cry A Lot

When I wrote this song
Autospell was on
But I didn’t know
So I carjacked onesie

I was going to write
About celebrities
In their mansion homes
With their big tea leaves

All the words they could use
Will never change what we do

All we ask is just be kind to us
All we ask is just be kind to us
And understand we all
Will lose

I've not made my bed
Cos they’re all tucked up
As their words deride 
We’ll just ride the tide

We’re not thriving now
Just surviving now
Cos what shapes our day
Are the words they say

All the words they could use
Will never change what we do

All we ask is just be kind to us
All we ask is just be kind to us
And understand we all
Will lose

Travelling around on our online existence highway
Purged of the words that can hurt if we’re seconds late

We’re just surviving in this
Broken world

Carjacked Onesie (played on BBC6 Music)

A celebration of what life can be like in your home town. Words and music originally by Ruthin acoustic rock band Record Street(Dr Dan Muckle-Jones, Ronnie Parry, Gareth Jones and Dan Compton; ably assisted by Wyn Rimmer and Sandra Muckle-Jones).

Record Street

There the way is a quirky, succinct beats track with a relevant story of social media interaction.

There's the Way

Play-listed on BBC6 Music (“Carjacked Onesie” & “Brave Jamel”) & BBC Tees (>15 songs).

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