Cool guitar track. Interesting tone and concept. Fun stuff!

good song and better ill like to see improve

the guitars got interesting distortion and tonal progression

Written, recorded, mixed and mastered by Jan aka Sönderrevet.
Vocal contributions from L.C. 

Lyrics 

You held your head up
Through thick and thin
Forming midnight visions
All towering within
The outside world was out of reach
and for such a long time
Hopes became a burden
It's been a long climb

And was it a fatal flaw
That you wouldn't step away?
It gets stripped of all your meaning,
and you're left carrying the weight

And this tired living
has been wearing you out
It gets your heart so broken
It is changing you now
For it won't be the same
as it once was
The more you were dreaming,
the more you seemed to be falling apart

You've been driving hard
for your higher needs
For all you envisioned
This life to be
And now as the light of youth
Begins to fade away
You know that the shifting sands
will take those dreams away

You said it was irredeemable 
to let that part of you go
You said, "what's in a new beginning,
When we must loose the things we love"

But this tired living
has been wearing you out
It gets your heart so broken
It is changing you now
For it won't be the same
As it once was
The more you were dreaming,
the more you seemed to be falling apart

Chapters Missing

Falls Apart

Ooo-Ooo-where'd you go-ohh-oh-where'd you go-where'd you go?
In the midst of the night your gaze so deep
your lips so sweet I want to keep
you move as a shadow graceful but sly
I'm drawn to you I can't deny
your touch a whisper upon my skin
Leaves me craving what could have been

But your like a dream slipping away
Leaving me yearning for another day

Ooo-Ooo
Ooo-where'd you go-
Ooo-where'd you go-
Ooo-where'd you go-
Ooo-where'd you go-

Oh your lips they draw me near
But you'er a mystery so unclear
In this night I'm lost in your kiss
But you'er an illusion I can't dismiss
your lips a temptation I can't resist
But you'er a fantasy just a twist
In this night I'm lost in your kiss
lost in your kiss

Ooo-Ooo

ohh you move through the crowd a sight to behold
ohh your presence leaves my heart aching so cold
ohh you'er like a ghost fading from sight
ohh Leaving me haunted by the memory of this night

Ooo-Ooo
Ooo-where'd you go-
Ooo-where'd you go-
Ooo-where'd you go-
Ooo-where'd you go-

Oh your lips they draw me near  
But you'er a mystery so unclear
In this night I'm lost in your kiss 
lost in your kiss 

Ooo-Ooo
Ooo-Ooo-where'd you go-
Ooo-Ooo-where'd you go-

ohh I reach out to you with no reply
ohh You're just a memory now goodbye
ohh You're just a memory now

Ooo-Ooo
Ooo-Ooo

ohh But in my heart I hold my feelings near 
ohh if I let you go your memory will just disappear

Ooo-where'd you go-
Ooo-where'd you go-
Ooo-where'd you go-
Ooo-where'd you go-

Where'd you go

Breach

Soft as cream.
Your waters wouldn't muddy a stream.
Just a blowhard.
All your wildest schemes 
They contain nothing at all.

The places you say you've been.
Found a quiet little corner to live in your dreams
Save your plastic pleas.
You're crazy.
Ooft, you're so hard.

Now, you want to think about it.
What is there to think about?
Now that you're all alone.
Sat on your phone.
Just a constant drone.
Now you wanna talk it out.
Always gotta talk about.
What is there to talk about?
You're just alone.
Boy, you should have known.

Summer breeze.
Floating on a high from the bennies kicking.
Pocket full of empty, candid, claptrap.
Outside, mafting, saucer, rat-trap.

It's hard to change.
When you've never even seen your own face.
When you can't decide which one to replace.
And which one to wear today.

Now you wanna think it out.
What is there to think about?
Now that you're all alone.
Sit on your phone.
Emit your constant drone.
Now you wanna talk it out.
Always gotta talk about.
What is there to talk about?
You're just alone.
Boy, you should have known.

Now you wanna think it out.
What is there to think about?
Now that you're all alone.
Sit on your phone.
Emit your constant drone.
Now you wanna talk it out.
Always gotta talk about.
What is there to talk about?
You're just alone.
Boy, you should have known.

When you look in the mirror.
Do you know who you face?
You're never gonna get out of this place.

Talk It Out

Moment To Moment

The Empty

Becker's Tale

this is another freshly recorded tune by @Earth-Patriot . 
It was recorded in July of 2024 with a Bc Rich #Mockinbird , a Bc Rich #Warlock guitar and a cord bass. In use is a #Marshall Mg100HdFx head.

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Nightmares from Elmstreet 11

In Your Honour

Nerdz

If I should fall
I don’t want to die here
If I should fall
I hope you’ll catch me

In the silence of the night
When the city sleeps 
I get up to live 
To make my dreams come true

If I should fall
I’ll go in peace
If I should fall
I’ll do it without fear

In the silence of the night
When the city sleeps 
I get up to live 
To make my dreams come true

If I should fall
I’ll go in peace
If I should fall
I’ll do it without fear

If I should fall
I don’t want to die here
If I should fall
I hope you’ll catch me

In the silence of the night
When the city sleeps 
I get up to live 
To make my dreams come true

If I should fall
I’ll go in peace
If I should fall
I’ll do it without fear

In the silence of the night
When the city sleeps 
I get up to live 
To make my dreams come true

If I should fall
I’ll go in peace
If I should fall
I’ll do it without fear

If I Should Fall

Fais un big son

I was born in 1971 and I play guitar for fun. In this channel my freestyle. I've never studied music, I play by ear and I do everything myself with my Squier guitar, Boss DS-1 distortion and my Zoom

Moment To Moment

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