There could have been more development, but I read about problems with DAW.

Something confuses me in these kick and bass, maybe low frequencies in too wide stereo.

Doesn't sound like an unfinished track! Sounds like a good track!

the kick seems squishy to me. Overall I dig this track tho. Doesn't seem all that unfinished to me!

This has the makings of a really nice track, but I feel the "unfinished" in the overall balance.  It's not bad, just feels like it could have been more refined, especially with your skill set.

Lovely section, I really like this theme.

There's lots of good background layers in here that help fill things out, but I still might have liked a little more development a little sooner

Unfinished track only using U-He's Triple Cheese virtual synth. Only added dynamics- and eq-processing in Renoise.

Check the final version: https://soundcloud.com/hanzmeyzer/triple-cheese-ditty-final

You can also download the song file over there.

KVR OSC #154 - Triplecheese Ditty

Synthwave, Dreamwave and "one synth only" tunes for your enjoyment.

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