Love this Catchy Track & Cool, Super Cool Concept & Eastern Vibes John !!! :-)

Wow amazing story telling, easily in top 5 songs I heard this year, real, raw , real talent. Perfection

I enjoy the melody and the tune.  If I could offer some advice, the lyrics would flow better if you "showed" the story, rather than "told" the story.  message me and I'll show you the sections I'm referring to, would love to help another artist out if you want it.

THE GODDESS pretty good song. Dont give up

This track was originally a poem and I asked my collaborator and producer, Josh Elliott, to come up with a sound like a cross between Celtic Music and Triphop.

The Goddess  

Comely, alive, 
Share your memories;
Gliding past my window,
Muttered tones so sweet.
Psychedelic garments,
Flashback to dreams,
Speaking in Shelta—
All is not quite what it seems.

The goddess always at my door
I hesitate; I’m just not sure.
Throwin’ shapes and droppin’ hints
Her forest dweller’s third eye glints.

Renounce, surrender, 
No more maudlin times in need;
Hurly-burly mischief making
The goddess will not feed...
As she follows me closely
Through the fjords of my heart
Firewood for the soul,
Its knowledge she’ll impart.

The goddess always at my door
I hesitate; I’m just not sure.
Throwin’ shapes and droppin’ hints
Her forest dweller’s third eye glints.


Scorching and burning...
Flambé my inconsistencies
Intoxicate with love.
Take me to the mesosphere,
A pilgrimage above,
Where earthbound before too long
And in the coldness of space
With chivalry of angels
She’ll sprinkle moondust on my face.

The goddess always at my door
I hesitate; I’m just not sure.
Throwin’ shapes and droppin’ hints
Her forest dweller’s third eye glints.

The goddess always at my door
I hesitate; I’m just not sure.
Throwin’ shapes and droppin’ hints
Her forest dweller’s third eye glints.

THE GODDESS

My poetry and music evolved as a personal response to the events of Sept 11th 2001, and the resulting conflicts. I began to meditate during this period, and the poetry, lyrics and melodies grew from there.

The songs wouldn't exist as finished 'entities' without Claudette Evans and Josh Elliott - two multi-talented people.

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