fog dissolves to rain (naviarhaiku586)

fog dissolves to rain (naviarhaiku586)

Ian Macartney

For the Naviar Records Haiku Challenge:

"fog dissolves to rain
- cool breezes clear the vista,
showing cloud-topped hills"
[Raymond Cobley]

Was interested in how the second line stars with a dash, a caesura — tried to…

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