it was one ohell of a day when I saw this

Good song, good singing, interesting arrangement. I just think it could be a bit less heavy on upbeats… Well done!

A really good song with real lyrics and a cracking vocal. It could be a great track with a better mix and mastering.

Woah. Really good man. Getting a bit of Rodriguez to it

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It’s Been a Hell of a Day 

Verse 1:
I saw her in the subway, she was waiting for the train, carrying no umbrella and she was dripping from the rain.  

She had a broken heel, and I could smell her broken heart.  

She limped from within like everything in life had gotten too hard.  

She must have spilled her coffee, she was bitching bout a stain.

It’s when she started laughing, I knew the tears weren’t far away


Chorus 
That’s when she said, it’s been a hell of a day, and even though I’m broke, I got the pain at the edge of a smile, sure feels better than the joke.  You can run out of luck and still have hope, no you can’t let it keep you down


Verse 2:
She turned to me and shrugged, wiped a black tear from her cheek, her bottom lip started trembling and she was shaking in her knees.   

She lit a cigarette and here come the police, she took a drag and flicked it at the track and the policeman let her be.  

Sat down on a bench and tossed a quarter to a bum, and she said pay no mind to this soul of mine because I ain’t got it bad as some


Chorus 2:
It’s been a hell of a day and you might want to die; you’ve been bit by the dog and someone spit in your eye, may be feeling cold and bitter, want to lay on the track, and kiss all your sorrows goodbye.


Chorus 3:
It’s been a hell of a day, and even if you’re broke, just pick up a stick, grunt, and give life a poke.  You can run out of luck and still have hope, no you can’t let it keep you down.


Chorus 4:
It’s been a hell of a day, well how you like that shit, she stood back up man and blew me a kiss.  Then she walked on past that yellow line and left all her troubles behind

La dee da dee da …

One Hell of a Day

Blue Moon

Playthrough - https://youtu.be/jgIih4yVJU0

Concept Album about the meaning of the Mourning
https://soundcloud.com/refound_emotions/sets/mourning

📍Guitars/ Gear:
- Ibanez Universe 777 (Juggs Misha Pickups)
- H.Benton (EMGx)
- H.Benton 6 strings Bass
- Ibanez SR305EB-WK Bass
- Neural DSP Quad Cortex
- Cubase & SD3

Thank you for all of your support and comments

Mourning - (Stunning) 03 Homecoming

Verse 1:
No one to be seen at all
idiots before the fall
Once your god now lies in rust
And your faith has turned to dust 

Nor more laughs and no more fun
no more wars that can’t be won
No first love and no last kiss
How can you laugh at this

I don’t know
Who I wanna be
But I fear He’s got a hold on me

I will always find you
You never lost me

Chorus:
After the bomb
When it’s all said and done
We’ll look back at our past life
Only with Shame?
Who’s really to blame
For the tears of our children

After the bomb
We’re all dead and gone
But we’ll live to see a new day

I look in your eyes and see
Who I’m always meant to be
Please wash my sins away

Verse 2:
On   the horizon I see
Something that was meant to be
Look up to the thorny crown
We must never just lie down

A new life I found the one
It’s too late to be undone
From the ashes we arise
This is not our last sunrise

I never wanted it to end this way
We thought we knew it all but forgot to pray
we will live to see
what will come to be
please save us

After The Bomb

The track begins with the opening lines of Shakespeare's Sonnet 66. The song blends elements of alternative rock and ambient music, characterized by its haunting melodies and introspective lyrics. The mood is somber yet resilient, capturing a sense of disillusionment with a touch of hope.

📀 Lyrics:

Tired with all these, for restful death I cry,
As, to behold desert a beggar born,
And needy nothing trimm'd in jollity,
And purest faith unhappily forsworn

Tired of the lies, I'm ready to flee,
World's gone crazy, ain't no place for me,
Dreams in the gutter, hope's been replaced,
Smilin' through the pain, maskin' the disgrace.

Truth's been twisted, called naive and dumb,
Goodness locked away, while evil's having fun,
Fools in control, making all the rules,
Wisdom's whispers silenced, treated like fools

Tired with all these, for restful death I cry,
As, to behold desert a beggar born,
And needy nothing trimm'd in jollity,
And purest faith unhappily forsworn

Honour's got no shine, shame's taken the stage,
Innocence sold out, locked up in a cage,
Perfection's twisted, strength's outta line,
Art's been silenced, controlled by the blind.

I'm tired, I'm broken, but I'll stay strong,
For the love we share, I'll always carry on,
In a world that's gone mad, you're my only light,
I'll fight for you, through this endless night

Forsaken Faith

small thing

I know you're hard to sleep
So just rest your head on me
And when you awake
I will be there waiting beside
And never leave

There's something in your smile
That pulls me in every time
And I can't explain
Every word, no way to say
That you're the one

But don't grow distant
It won't be the same
If you say you'll leave me
I'll crawl in my grave
My strangest feeling
Is we won't be okay
But we'll get right through this
It's a small little thing

It's getting hard to breathe
Putting my heart on my sleeve
From my head to my chest down to my feet
You're all I need

You're the only one I see
Trust me, there ain't none for me
And when you're gone
Every second feels like hell
You won't believe

But don't grow distant
It won't be the same
If you say you'll leave me
I'll crawl in my grave
It's bad for my mental
It's bad for my health
But we'll get right through this
It's a small little thing

Instrumental

But don't grow distant
It won't be the same
If you say you'll leave me
I'll crawl in my grave
My strangest feeling
Is we won't be okay
But we'll get right through this
It's a small little thing

Small Thing

Cant afford the Moon

yours truly

This tune was inspired by a Robert Frost poem, adapted liberally of course, and set to a dream pop melody. If you're looking for a new Christmas music sound, give this a listen. The complete 8-track album drops Nov. 9/25. Thanks.

Journey in the Snow

Red Weather V2

LoFi Americana with a dash of Indie Alt Rock and Country 

Jeremy Brizzi is a songwriter and musician.  “I do what I can, with what I have, to show you how I feel.  Thanks for listening.”

With more than 300 song left to record and a constant attention to creation, the best is yet to come!  

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