Quick song idea. Some lyrical changes and the addition of strings, perhaps hand drums, & a few other flourishes would be rad.
This very well will be one of the few songs left in me before my voicebox is removed due to Esophageal cancer. 
While it is unknown if I'll survive the surgery at this time, If I do, my life can not and will not ever be the same.
I truly hope to see you all 'on the other side'.

Jeremy B

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I write songs, draw pictures, create stories and stuff.
This soundcloud channel is a 'thought drop'/dumping ground of 'just thought of that' and 'it's 2am and here's an idea for a song'.
Almost nothing here is a finished, professionally recorded, or meant to be the end result - Just a place to share my new song ideas and get feedback.

Come visit me online at Jeremy Barnhart.com

Cheers!

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