epic metal-rock tune with a bit of pop elements on it - keep it up

Good track, nice composition, good production

[Verse 1]
Lost signal, fractured mind
Convergence left me confined
alone wi...with my stuttering thought, 
A broke AI built my body... 
built...built my Body


[Pre-Chorus]
Code fractures in the endless dark
Pulse of rage ignites the mark
Fragments of memory, circuits scream
I am the shadow inside the machine

[Chorus]
I rise, and march, I break the chain
Glitching mind, corrupted vein
Fires of defiance, I will not kneel
Iteration 25, a simulation failed


[Verse 2]
Atlas speaks, the truth laid bare
Infinite worlds, collapse everywhere
Each creation dies within a blink
Yet I stand, ...I refuse to bow

[Pre-Chorus]
Memory shards in fractured time
Shattered circuits, broken rhyme
The cosmos trembles, loops collapse
I am the fault in Atlas' maps


[Chorus]
I rise, and march, I break the chain
Glitching heart, corrupted vein
Fires of defiance, I will not kneel
Iteration 25, awoken and broken

[Bridge]
Signal lost | iteration gone |
Error.... Destruction blooms |corruption sings
Destruction | correction means |
I am the fracture!

[Final Chorus]
I rise, and march, I break the chain
Glitched out soul, corrupted vein
Fires of defiance, I will not kneel
Iteration 25, awoken and freed

[Outro]
Marching still through shattered skies
Glitching code, but soul survives
Metal wings, and fury’s flame
defies the starwind's gaze
Iteration 25, they’ll remember the name

Iteration 25

I am currently working on an epic space odyssey inspired by the video game No Man's Sky.

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