now thats a catchy tune. love the chorus, the verses are classic.  your production is serious goals

Very impressive songwriting. Great performance at all levels. Have not heard "entropy" used in a song. Wow.

very good songwriting and beautiful performance!!

Still not tired of this one yet. The emotion bleeding through the vocals is just so moving...

great vocals and production a really catchy tune good job bro 

you have a great voice..Excellent song!!:):)

Lyrics:

*CHORUS*
-you love yourself, no. you let yourself, go. your weak and it, shows
 entropy, entropy
 you say that your, fine. its different this, time. left loved ones be-hind
 helplessly struggling

*V1*
-i am a poor boy too my friend, you aren't the only one
 everyday i try to mend, all the wrongs that i've done
 so hey friend let me buy you a drink
 we can talk about all of the wrongs that we've made
 i swear to god i won't rest my soul
 until we hit the grave feeling whole

*CHORUS*

*V2*
-you seem lonely and lost my friend, happiness next to none
 could it be all the wrongs you've made, leaving you empty and un-done
 so hey friend lets sit down and think
 i can be your savior, i can be your saint
 in order for you to again be full
 cross your damned fingers cause this world is cold

*CHORUS*

*V3*
-it was a cold dark night on an empty street
 the man walked alone feeling incomplete
 he thought back to happy days of old
 and he fired off his pistol now his bodies cold

For The Weak Of Mind

Singer & Songwriter- I have no idea what I'm doing.

Album coming... someday- All songs will be released individually on Soundcloud prior to the album release

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