cool beat great job love the whispery vocal

I really like this instrumental though. too dope

This is the first piece that really touched me when I began on SC, your voice, interwoven with the instrumental is still unlike anything I have heard on here, very inspirational. Back then I didn't know how to comment or repost, now I shall.

Very good , mind if i send you a beat to rate?

Production: Lake Adagio

Lyrics: 
Ventilation
I won't know how you feel until you say sum'n
Air it out, too loud, I know, that sweet sensation
My sweet temptation,
Ventilation
You don't come 'round no more, who took my place, huh?
Clean out your mind, I fuck with that 
It's up to you, we can go back
To smoking with the windows cracked

I ain't crying, I'm just focused
Don't be worried, I ain't crying you no ocean
Peep the story you could never tell I'm hopeless
Til you open up, I'm smokin' through the motions
I'm just sorry I ain't give what you wanted
But I ain't sorry for the things that I can't change 
Been the same damn nigga since the day you fucking came 

I think I love you, give me one more chance 
To make it right, now baby don't hold in
You need some 

Ventilation
I won't know how you feel until you say sum'n
Air it out, too loud, I know, that sweet sensation
My sweet temptation
Ventilation
You don't come 'round no more, who took my place, huh?
Clean out your mind, I fuck with that 
It's up to you, we can go back
To smoking with the windows cracked

Find a way 
Please don't fly away 
I won't try to stay
'Less it's my way, baby find a way,
Find a way to speak honestly 
Why you tryna be 
Hard to see 
Crack your window 
Ventilate to me, yeah

And if you down to give me one more chance 
To make it right, baby I won't hold in
I need some 

Ventilation (x6)

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