Chill extended drum introduction, where I definitely think you could've been a bit more creative, don't be scared to add more elements and start the track of properly in a hard way. The overall track is really cool and I'm totally digging the guitar sample. I think you should try to work more with your mix down, because I don't feel the kick peaking out of the mix, which I personally prefer.

Jeff! This is great - thank you for sending through this demo. The overall vibe is spot on and we dig the percussion throughout. Saying that - the intro is quite long. So the progressive elements should come in sooner - adding more top elements and subtle elements would add to the mix from 0:32. The bass synth is nice here - but quite repetitive? Perhaps a more flowing bass progression could add to the variety here. Still - nice elements at 1:18. This is a nice instrumental section - but we feel the kick could be taken out here before 1:32 so that there is more impact in the drop! Working on your sections to make the more varied will improve your work in future. Keep up the tidy work :)

Jeff Devoe - Poisonous EP
Stream & Download: https://fanlink.to/Poisonous-EP

Jeff Devoe
@devoe
Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/devoela
Mixcloud: http://www.mixcloud.com/mr_devoe/

Stream & Download

Jeff Devoe - Poisonous

The Los Angeles Music Project (LAMP) 

Artist collective, music publication, and events brand based in Los Angeles, CA.

A division of PUZL, Inc. / PUZL Records @puzl-records

Comments

spunks22

Saturn

by.proxy

TracksForDays

Top 40

Curt Reynolds

Le Véritable Wax Parisien

Büx (Buexmusic)