Only my second song, criticism much appreciated. Recorded with Ableton Live.

Pleeeease Repost and Favorite if you like it. thanks!

Negative Polarity

I've been searching for,
I've been dreaming,
I've been wandering this earth.
Looking for someone like you..

I've imagined that moment
When you're standing across the rooom
And our eyes lock, And poof just like that
Everything, every journey I've been on
Suddenly makes sense...

YOU Are THE ONE I've BEEN loooking for
YOU Are THE ONE I want to hold
YOU Are THE ONE I want to grow old with
YOU Are THE ONE

Negative Polarity

Light Grenade