I'm not sure how I feel about the "I'm on" intro a bit repetitive. Your verse isn't bad, your vocals are a bit too thin though balance the eq. The beat itself is nice, and I'm feeling the lyrics  Delivery could use a little work, for instance the "What you planning to DOO" the ending didn't come off confidently. Work on your inflection. Keep it though you've got potential.

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