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AmericanSweetheart

IfHeDies,HeDies

.ZIP

HitBoutIt

https://soundcloud.com/draconiangrime/sets/geefather-fm?si=17aea0daa21940a79665c2547499d11a&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

GeeFather

Phantom Zone

PHANTOM ZONE

Noumena

written, produced and performed by Jah-Femi Telewa
Lyrics + meaning

The hard way

Ayeee

I got feelings that got ate for dinners = she disregards my feelings 
A cardboard breakfast cause she lacked the feelings = she gives me tasteless meals cause she doesn’t care about me
Crusing down main streets with some hoodlem fellas = she’s chilling with thugs
Turkish street gang with them sword umbrellas = violent thugs
Gangster how she walk, talk crawl with stilettos = she’s slick in the way she dresses and walks 
Don’t worry how she think she got them big letters= don’t worry about her intellect she’s uses big words 
Wet dripping look she like them crispy lettuce = she’s chilling look seductive the way she sweats looks as enticing as crispy lettuce 
Stay praying hoping that she won’t forget us = I’m still hoping she’s got love for me

Put sum in it stomp with it = put some effort in how you walk
I’m with it, luckily you’re in session = I’m on your side and you’re up for a seductive dance in front of me



ChatGPT Analysis: Now that I understand the street slang behind your lines, the piece takes on a much more nuanced and authentic feel. Let me re-analyze and re-rate it based on the deeper context you’ve provided.

Revised Analysis
	1.	Themes:
	•	Unrequited Love and Emotional Neglect: “Feelings that got ate for dinners” and “cardboard breakfast” capture a sense of being emotionally discarded, yet still yearning for connection.
	•	Street Life Vibes: Lines about “hoodlum fellas” and “Turkish street gang” set the scene of a gritty urban backdrop, emphasizing the harsh reality of her world.
	•	Admiration for Her Complexity: Despite her coldness and detached demeanor, you admire her style, intellect, and seductive nature, as shown in “gangster how she walk” and “wet dripping look.”
	•	Tough Love: “Hard grind love is your true confession” encapsulates the rawness of the relationship dynamic, where affection is expressed in a rugged, unapologetic way.
	2.	Imagery and Wordplay:
	•	Street-Rooted Authenticity: Your use of slang and metaphors, such as “sword umbrellas” (violent imagery) and “crispy lettuce” (a fresh and enticing look), paints a vivid picture.
	•	Contrast Between Emotion and Edge: The juxtaposition of love and street culture adds depth, making it more than just a surface-level description of a relationship.
	•	Commanding Presence: The phrases “put sum in it stomp with it” and “gangster how she walk” portray her as a commanding figure, while still hinting at her vulnerability.
	3.	Suggestions for Further Strength:
	•	Clarify Connections: Some transitions, like from “crispy lettuce” to “stay praying,” still feel slightly abrupt. Adding a line to bridge the emotional and visual layers could enhance the flow.
	•	Deepen Emotional Contrast: The tough love theme is strong—highlight how it affects you on a personal level to add emotional resonance.

Revised Rating

Now that I see the full depth of your piece, I’d rate it 8.5/10. The street slang and urban grit give it authenticity, and the raw emotion adds a layer of vulnerability. With minor tweaks to enhance the flow and explore the emotional tension further, it could hit a solid 9 or higher. This is a strong piece with a unique voice.

Hard grind love is your true confession = she like tough love

The Hard Way (short rap session SRS)

SparrowsCreek

Bones & Eddy Baker - HateToSayIToldYouSo

Prod. by The Virus And Antidote 
https://sesh.link/underthewillowtree

UnderTheWillowTree

Bones - SixFeetDeep

* #Lyrics *

#LaCasaDeAutomatico

#ImpalaBeatsEnLaPista 

( #Verse 1: #Automatico )

She had me hypnotized
From the moment I saw her face
And I can not believe that it's irony
It's the moment I fell from my grace
She lifted me up
With such a simple touch
I could never get enough
I need you tonight
Is this more than a dream
I'm only asking once 
Fulfill my fantasy

( #Chorus )

Baby girl, the way you ride on me
The way you grind on me
Emotions overflowin' inside
Everytime you're gone from me
It's like my heart starts to bleed
You make it hard for me to breathe
Baby, when you ride on me
The way you grind on me
Emotions overflowin' inside of me
Everytime you're gone from me
When you're gone from me
You make it hard for me to breathe

( #Bridge )

Con un movimiento loca
Ya estamos en la nota
Sabanas mojadas
Mirando al espejo
Ella se toca
Me dices al oido
Que ella quiere un besito
En la boca
Yo le dije
Mi reina, vamono a toa
Been thinkin' 'bout you lately
Your energy is savory
More than a blessing
The day that you saved me
Baby, when you're gone from me
(When you're gone from me)
When you're gone from me
(When you're gone from me)
You make it hard for me to breathe

(Verse 2)

We been rockin' back and forth
For some time now
Si la viera, te lo juro
She's a knockout
I know that she a rider
When the twelve come around
She don't cop out
She pop out
Grippin' that thing
Got the keys to the compound
That's another topic
Now we on the move
I fall in love with you more and more
When I see your eyes glisten in the moon
I'm fortunate the day that I met you
I'm your King, you're my Queen
It'd be an honor to protect you
She's a problem

(Verse 1)

She had me hypnotized (I was mesmerized)
From the moment I saw her face (When I saw your face)
And I can not believe that it's irony
It's the moment I fell from my grace (Ey, ey)
She lifted me up (Mi angel del cielo)
With such a simple touch (Solo por un beso)
I could never get enough (No, no no no no)
I need you tonight (Necesito de tu amor)
Is this more than a dream (Ven y dimelo)
I'm only asking once (Lo unico que pido)
Fulfill my fantasy (Ay, yi yi yi yi)

(Chorus)

( #Outro )

When you're gone from me (When you're gone from me)
When you're gone from me (Gone from me)
When you're gone from me (Gone from me)
When you're gone from me (When you're gone from me)
When you're gone from me (Gone from me)
When you're gone from me (Gone from me)

I need you tonight (Tonight, tonight)
Con un movimiento loca
Ya estamos en la nota
Sabanas mojadas
Mirando al espejo
Ella se toca
Been thinkin' 'bout you lately
Your energy is savory
More than a blessing
The day that you saved me

Baby, when you're gone from me (When you're gone from me)
When you're gone from me (When you're gone from me)
You make it hard for me to breathe
Baby (Baby, baby)
Baby, when you're gone from me (When you're gone from me)
When you're gone from me (When you're gone from me)
You make it hard for me to breathe

Baby, when you ride on me
The way you grind on me
Emotions overflowin' inside of me
Everytime you're gone from me
When you're gone from me
You make it hard for me to breathe
#Breathe (Breathe, breathe)

( #Credits ) 

#Producer: #ImpalaBeats
#MixedAndMasteredBy: Automatico

Automatico - Breathe (Official Audio)

PermanentFrown - EP

Utility

Noumena

M6T