The production conjures images of beaches and regret..well done

Superb controlled writing. Understated production. Lyrically intense. Love it. Chris

adrift in our bed when the dream begins,
windows left open and the ocean spilling in,
with star fish above her,
a pearl in a shell to discover-
I'm swept up in her wake, wave after wave-

surface grows distant as the fish swim into view, 
slow motion gems in her eyes, flashing green and blue,
the clown fish will love her,
storms brew above her,
she pulls me under, wave after wave-

the tide is subsiding, her motion is inviting,
washing over me, wave after wave-

the surface is falling, orca still calling,
wake her slowly, wave after wave-


http://maccharles.bandcamp.com/track/wave-after-wave







Wave After Wave

I have completed two years of "song a week for life" and am looking forward to year three.....to follow the results, please visit my bandcamp page, or see my blog by clicking the links below. Due to space restrictions,not all songs will be posted here.
Thanks for listening.

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