Sounds good, nice clean mix, gr8 melody and vocal delivery...

Epic! Very cool stops and starts, each time bringing something new, a twist, a turn, and carrying me into the darkness where your song character lives. Powerful. ⁓Rebecca

Digging this one man! The rhythm guitar carries the groove really well with some nice chop rhythm

Really good guitar tone and playing.  Vocals sound strong and the effects add a nice touch.  The pauses give it a cool progression.

Nice guitar tones! This sounds modern but vintage at the same time. I like that it doesn't feel super polished either; very raw and expressive 🖤 [via https://sc.repostexchange.com]

Excellent work, nice cover art too💯👍

Our blood we shed
Runs in a circle, a system built to fail
Muscles and sinews
Tangled like vines under your skin of pale

My pair of hands
Can untangle you and build anew from them
My life given meaning
I'll take my time to unravel you from the hem

You are the rain
We are the same

The blood in you
I release from its cycle of endless routine
Your end's a beginning
To make me feel pure and once again more clean

You are the rain
We are the same

I will be reborn
And bite the serpent's tail
And around we'll go
Unless someone tips the scale
  
The cycle, cycle's repeating
Cycle, cycle's repeating
Cycle, cycle's repeating
Cycle, cycle's repeating      
(Maybe I'm wrong)
Cycle, cycle's repeating   
(Maybe I'm wrong)
Cycle, cycle's repeating     
(Maybe I'm wrong)
Cycle, cycle's repeating      
(Maybe I'm wrong)
(Maybe I'm wrong)
(Maybe I'm wrong)
(Maybe I'm wrong)

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