It has many interesting variations, but still feels too long.

Quite nice entry! It would be good to Make it a bit shorter and add some direction into composition.

The title and pic could be from our latest health and safety training drive at work...

I like the driving bass and leads, but the clap-snare sounds a bit harsh to me. Overall enjoyed it GL :)

I think the much of the drum set is too loud throughout and drowns out some really fantastic parts.

There is much that is good here -- and great title and graphic - but the track feels so compressed that it loses some life.  And that snare is a bit far forward for me.

Interesting piece but I think the dynamic squash messed with the mix.  Fun to listen to.

This arp really came out at me, nicely done

Overall, good comments. Wanted to add that some thematic variation, and possibly change in mixing could blast it into the stratosphere

This is submission for One Synth Challenge @ KVR.

Technical details here: https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=7187849#p7187849

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