Great relatable writing so well delivered in an earnest lofi manner:)

lovely song! beautiful lyrics, gorgeous voice!

wow, well done, you deliver such relatable lyrics that draw in the listener and share how she feels. Pro performance my friend.

Just love the story behind your lyrics and music. Really great to hear each word. Love the music journey and great vocals

This song is for all the people who don't love themselves

She Breaks

When she woke up, on a better day
She tried to lose it all, but she just can't shake; the weather upset her 
More than she’d like to fake

I tried and tried, more than complain
She’s says fine, at least that’s what she paints in her mind all of the time
She breaks

She breaks whenever she can't escape
The thoughts of every part she hates
Of herself is what she once explained 

I know she loves, the rabbits that eat our greens
‘Cause she's got plants in the hundred teens
If I'm right, don't ask if she agrees

She’s lost much more, more than she’s ever gained
She cries much more, more than she’d ever say
But it’s lies- that was the way she’s raised

She breaks whenever she can't escape
The thoughts of every part she hates
Of herself is what she once explained

I know it's not the truth I see
At all but I can't make her see
Herself like she means to me

So I'll stay right here with her
Until there's nothing left to burn
But ourselves to keep this fire warm

She breaks but now and then she escapes
To thoughts of everything we have made
For ourselves to keep this fire warm


She Breaks

12/6/25: New track is out out! Hope you all like it, hopefully more content to come soon!

Moe Kim is middle-aged man who doesn't usually refer to himself in the third person. In another life he was a surgeon but left the field because he got really tired and needed some rest. Now he has more time to record music, which is way more fun than living at the hospital.

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