Bro I think this is a great concept with radio potential. Please dm me because I'd love to have our company mix and  master this for you and give you free tips on how to BLOW UP EVEN MORE!!!!

Smooth and convincing!  You have a smart sound and all I could suggest is search for the killer hook....  that is the ticket.

Cool Alt rock club vibe...dark and mysterious...

Recently I've been listening to lots of post-punk type of stuff and this sounds similar, great stuff.

Crazy song man, really nice vocals, keep it up

Very emotional and felt! 🗣🥲 reminds me of king krule! Keep doin you! Namaste 💆🏾‍♂️🔫🦋

Wow , fantastic. Very relaxing song. I wouldnt change any thing of the track - it is great.

Great sound, love the guitars especially :)

Lyrics:
I had dreams of being rock star
I Had dreams of being rockstar
Now I just live with my mom 
Workin some retail job

I crave debauchary 
So sweet all my sins catching up to me again
I’ll flee again, I’ll flee again 
drag this blade cross my skin

All I do is watch pixelated images of people
Fuckin and look up type beats on youtube
Here I go dreaming again

I’m being crushed under
the weight of my dreams 
Wont you pull me out of this scene 
I see no end to my depravity 
Kill me slow and steadily
My aspirations caught this ceiling
I can only sing to you how I am feeling

I CRAVE DE-BAU-CHERY
I CRAVE DE-BAU-CHERY

Here I go dreaming again
She won’t talk to me again, 
She won’t talk to me again
I miss her touch
I had a beautiful girlfriend 
burned that bridge
Sparks and Flame light up 
like propane it burned my face

HELLFIRE SCOR-CHING ME I’LL SIN AGAIN AND
BEG AT YOUR AL-TER FOR FORGIVE-NESS AGAIN
I LOVE WHEN WE DATED BUT, 
OUR LOVE SLOWLY DILAPIDATED  

I’m being crushed 
under the weight of my dreams 
Won’t you pull me out of this scene 
I see no end to my depravity 
Kill me slow and steadily
My aspirations caught this ceiling
I can only sing to you how I am feeling

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I… CRAVE… DEBAUCHERY
I… CRAVE… DEBAUCHERY
I… CRAVE… DEBAUCHERY

BEFORE THE DEBAUCHERY

I CRAVE DEBAUCHERY

☾
ᶜᵃˢᵗ ᵃʷᵃʸ ʸᵒᵘʳ ᶠˡᵉˢʰ//

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