Name: WJ Demo by Porkboii
Duration: 3 min 48 s
Description: Feedback Please. What works. What doesn't work? How should I layer? Do the harmonies work as they are? I like them but not completely, I definitely want to improve on this one.

big thanks to Soy for drumming on this +Aaron for mastering 

spotify: https://open.spotify.com/album/1Dbcsm0waP7an72E8jMhem?si=kQlrxDXOR5yuUEf8sqYTrQ

music video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CyGFaH2ofSE

Strange In-Between

Feedback Please. What works. What doesn't work? How should I layer? Do the harmonies work as they are? I like them but not completely, I definitely want to improve on this one.

WJ Demo

here are the lyrics.. idk i was just fooling around with the synthesizers in garage band (my super professional recording equipment)
thank u for listening to my music thank u so much 


LYRICS:  
there's a place
down by the river
everyone goes

to escape
down by the river
everyone knows

down by the river
we speak in tongues
only we can understand
down by the river 
we hold the world
in the palm of our hand

down by the river you feel the sun
in your hair
and it's golden
kick off your shoes
and run
go with the motion

sometimes it's dangerous to be implusive and nocturnal

down by the river

seems i am blind to my own being
diffuse my brain im losing feeling
Adonis towers over me
bathed in nectar and apathy

seasons change i dont go with them
a stranger embedded in your reflection
i dread the truth so i float in suspension
no one to blame for my own self deception

when will i come back
was i even here at all
rip the seams of this quilted mask
i don’t think i mind feeling so small

the world looks a lot finer through my window
always estranged but thats how its been so
sick of all these growing pains
leaving my room just to unbind my restraints

WJ Demo

Porkboii

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