nice crescendo towards the chorus and use of major and minor chords. Vocalist solid

vocalist was totally good. nice variation of soft and loud. and its definitely very clear and I like the vocalist's confidence, I can feel it. I wish you would use piano bc now you have 2 electric guitarist. Maybe a piano can help to richen the harmonies and provide some bass which seemed to be lacking. but really the vocals -wow wow wow. the song sounds great. loved the chord change at the start of the chorus. even though its long, way more than 2 min, the piece was lovely to hear. great job!!

love the effect the drums have on the chorus <3

I love how the vocals are clear and in the forefront, the guitar and drums supports it nicely. I like how it goes from sounding minor to major in the chorus. Amazing🥵

the chord change from the verse to the chorus is rlly rlly great! that (as well as the crescendo and other elements) rlly helped me distinguish whether u guys had transition into another section of the song or not. Qiyu vocals are spectacular! great job :D

Very unique concept used for the darkness of the song which fits the overall vibe and theme to it great job overall

Credits:
Qiyu - Composer(Melody), Lyrics, Vocals
Amanda - Drums
Bryant - Electric Guitar
Mamo - Electric Guitar, Composer(Intro/Outro/Chords)

One-mic recording in T2026

Lyrics:

Demons

[VERSE 1]
I, lost my way
In a crowd, of sinners
Life, passed away
A wild chase, no winners 

And I, thought I knew
Thought I stood a chance
In the face of loneliness
I began to dance

[PRE-CHROUS 1]
And when the time comes
I’ll rise up
I’ll stand up
And when the skies fall
All out of luck
I’ll let you win

[CHORUS]
Until then,
I’ll keep dancing with my demons
Wherever they take me
No more right or wrong
No more wrong

[VERSE 2]
Pain, bittersweet
Does it feel good, to see me bleed
Rain, I couldn’t see
You were taking me, straight down

And now, I’m so lost
Now, I’m so lost
We won the war
But at what cost
At what cost

[PRE-CHROUS 1]
And when the time comes
I’ll rise up
I’ll stand up
And when the skies fall
All out of luck
I’ll let you win

[CHORUS]
So then,
I’ll keep dancing with my demons
Wherever they take me
No more right or wrong
And so,
I’ll keep breathing underwater
Wherever I’m going
Till I’m too far gone
Till I’m gone

[OUTRO]
Till I’m gone

Demons

Music & Lyrics by Yang Qiyu

Lyrics:

Don't

[VERSE]

I knew from the start
That you would poison me
I gave you my trust
And you threw it all away

Liar liar
To my face
Liar liar
Now it’s too late

[PRE-CHORUS]

What about, what about, what about love
What about, what about, what about love

[CHORUS]

Don’t show up in my dreams, 
'Cause I hate the emptiness when I wake up
Don’t lay your weight on me,
'Cause I’m only human just like you are
Don’t feel sorry about what could’ve been, 
'Cause the future holds more than just us
If you’ve ever walked a mile in my shoes,
You wouldn’t tell me I don’t have a heart
You wouldn’t tell me I don’t have a heart
You wouldn’t tell me

[VERSE]

Now the day is gone
As the clouds roll by
We’ll paint them red
Our own sky of fire

You gave me hope
That I won’t be sad
How cruel of you
To take it back

[PRE-CHORUS]

What about, what about, what about love
What about, what about, what about love

[CHORUS]

Don’t show up in my dreams, 
'Cause I hate the emptiness when I wake up
Don’t lay your weight on me,
'Cause I’m only human just like you are
Don’t feel sorry about what could’ve been, 
'Cause the future holds more than just us
If you’ve ever walked a mile in my shoes,
You wouldn’t tell me I don’t have a heart
You wouldn’t tell me I don’t have a heart
You wouldn’t tell me

[BRIDGE]

We felt like the kings of the world, so long, so long
We felt like the kings of the world, so long, so long
We felt like the kings of the world, so long, so long
We felt like the kings of the world, so long, so long

[CHORUS]

Don’t show up in my dreams, 
'Cause I hate the emptiness when I wake up
Don’t lay your weight on me,
'Cause I’m only human just like you are
Don’t feel sorry about what could’ve been, 
'Cause the future holds more than just us
If you’ve ever walked a mile in my shoes,
You wouldn’t tell me I don’t have a heart
You wouldn’t tell me I don’t have a heart
You wouldn’t tell me

Don't

Music & Lyrics by Yang Qiyu

Lyrics:

Would You Still Love Me

[VERSE]
I hope I make you happy
I hope I make you glad 
I hope I can always keep you close

[PRE-CHORUS]
But when I’m around you
My darkness gets a little too comfortable
Threatening to spill

[CHORUS]
Would you still love me even if 
I couldn’t feel?
Would you still love me even if 
None of me was real?

[VERSE]
I think you make me happy
I think you make me glad
I know I will always keep you close

[PRE-CHORUS]
But when I’m around you
My darkness gets a little too comfortable
Threatening to spill

[CHORUS]
Would you still love me even if
I lost my mind?
Would you still love me even if 
You knew what I am?

[BRIDGE]
Cause you make me feel like
There’s a place for me in this world after all
When I’m with you I feel alive
My heart starts to beat just like yours

[CHORUS]
Would you still love me even if 
I couldn’t feel?
Would you still love me even if 
None of me was real?

Cause I will still love you even if
You can’t feel
And I will still love you even if
You are empty
Just like me

[OUTRO]
I hope I make you happy

Would You Still Love Me (demo)

Music & Lyrics by Yang Qiyu
Prod. by Yang Qiyu

Lyrics:

Would You Still Love Me

I hope I make you happy
I hope I make you glad
I hope I can always keep you close

But when I’m around you
My darkness gets a little too comfortable
Threatening to spill

Would you still love me even if
I couldn’t feel?
Would you still love me even if
None of me was real?


I think you make me happy
I think you make me glad
I know I will always keep you close

But when I’m around you
My darkness gets a little too comfortable
Threatening to spill

Would you still love me even if
I lost my mind?
Would you still love me even if
You knew what I am?

Cause you make me feel like
There’s a place for me in this world after all
When I’m with you I feel alive
My heart starts to beat just like yours

Would you still love me even if
I couldn’t feel?
Would you still love me even if
None of me was real?

Cause I will still love you even if
You can’t feel
And I will still love you even if
You are empty
Just like me


I hope I make you happy

Would You Still Love Me

Would You Still Love Me (Official Audio)

Music & Lyrics by Yang Qiyu

Lyrics:

【秘密】 'Secret'

[VERSE 1]

自作聪明着似乎就成了年
I used to pretend to be all grown up but now it’s really time

除了疲倦什么都不比从前
Nothing’s changed for the better except I’m a little more tired

无数的人影在我眼前重现
Countless silhouettes overlap before my eyes again

每一张却都变成了你的脸
But every single face blurs into yours


[PRE-CHORUS]

要是我早一点认识你就好了
If only I’d known you a little sooner

要是我晚一点认识你就好了
If only I’d known you a little later


[CHORUS 1]

因为你我有了继续努力的勇气
Thanks to you I have the courage to keep going

即使没有奇迹也是美好的回忆
We left behind fond memories even if miracles were never for us

别担心我会永远保护你的秘密
Don’t worry your secret’s safe with me

因为这是你最后属于我的东西
Because it’s the last part of you that belongs to me


[VERSE 2]

我游荡在人群中越陷越深
I drift through the crowd sinking deeper and deeper

可我不知道该怎么一个人
Still the silence gets so loud I don’t know how to be by myself

寂寞难忍却假装看破红尘
Loneliness was killing me but I pretended I was above it all

别无选择习惯了渺然一身
In the end without a choice I became numb and called it reality

[PRE-CHORUS]

要是我早一点认识你就好了
If only I’d known you a little sooner

要是我晚一点认识你就好了
If only I’d known you a little later


[CHORUS 2]

别担心我会永远保护你的秘密
Don’t worry your secret’s safe with me

因为这是你最后属于我的东西
Because it’s the last part of you that belongs to me


[VERSE 3]

只是这里的天空没了你是灰色的
it’s just that the sky without you here is a little grey

漂泊太久的人都不再发觉水冷了
As time passes we don’t notice the water’s getting cold as we drift away

可惜无论是谁对谁错一切都太晚了
Shame it no longer matters who was right or wrong it’s all too late

再也没有如果 也许 一定 明天会好的
No more ‘if, maybe, I promise tomorrow will be a better day’


[BRIDGE]

我曾那么较真
I was so stubborn

可现在雁逝鱼沉
Now it’s all gone

我曾那么较真
I was so stubborn

可现在雁逝鱼沉
Now it’s all gone

秘密 'Secret'

Music & Lyrics by Yang Qiyu
Prod. by Yang Qiyu

Lyrics:

If the World

[INSTRUMENTAL]

It’s funny to think
It’s been nearly a decade
Every year the same
Hoping this time I'll see your face
When I first saw you smile
And when I first saw you cry
That night you got drunk
I’ll never forget those eyes

When the world was on fire
We danced through the pain
But when it all died down
You went away with the flames

Even if the world forgets
Who you once were
Even if the world forgets
I’ll feel your embers
Even if the world forgets
I will never
And even if the world forgets
I’ll remember

[INSTRUMENTAL]

The doll on my bed
Time passed in those cold days
That yellow guitar
Under the sun that day you played
You were golden then
But then everything changed
You said you were sorry
You’d never be happy again

When the world was on fire
We danced through the pain
But when it all died down
You went away with the flames

Even if the world forgets
Who you once were
Even if the world forgets
I’ll feel your embers
Even if the world forgets
I will never
And even if the world forgets
I’ll remember

I don’t need a reason to wake up in the morning
I get up and I get on with my day in a second
I meet people and I laugh and smile and I cry
I don’t need to understand life I don’t want to try
But I know
Even if the world forgets
I’ll remember you
Even if the world forgets

Even if the world forgets
Who you once were
Even if the world forgets
I’ll feel your embers
Even if the world forgets
I will never
And even if the world forgets
I’ll remember

If the World

If the World (Official Audio)

Artist: Lek Zhe Ee (Jay)

Music and Lyrics by Yang Qiyu
Produced by Yang Qiyu


Lyrics


Somebody tell me
Am I right 
Or am I wrong 
Way in the distance
Through the dark
Which way is home 
There was nowhere to go but up
So I never stopped  
Will you fly up to the sun with me
Before we fall


Promise me I’ll still care when I’m older
And maybe I, I’ll carry on
Promise me I’ll still care when I’m older
And maybe I, I’ll carry on
Promise me I’ll still love when I’m older
And maybe I, I’ll carry on


After all the destruction we paint pretty watercolours
We had our fun, we always knew
If I could go back I wouldn’t look behind the curtain
It had to come, still I wished it wasn’t true
I always knew
Still I wished it wasn’t true
I always knew


Promise me I’ll still care when I’m older (I always knew)
And maybe I, I’ll carry on (Still I wished it wasn’t true)
Promise me I’ll still love when I’m older (I always knew)
Still I wished it wasn’t true

When I'm Older

When I'm Older (demo)

Artist: Lek Zhe Ee (Jay)

Music and Lyrics by Yang Qiyu
Produced by Yang Qiyu

Lyrics:

Somebody tell me
Am I right 
Or am I wrong 
Way in the distance
Through the dark
Which way is home 
There was nowhere to go but up
So I never stopped  
Will you fly up to the sun with me
Before we fall


Promise me I’ll still care when I’m older
And maybe I, I’ll carry on
Promise me I’ll still care when I’m older
And maybe I, I’ll carry on
Promise me I’ll still love when I’m older (love when I’m older)
And maybe I, I’ll carry on


After all the destruction we paint pretty watercolours
We had our fun, we always knew
If I could go back I wouldn’t look behind the curtain
It had to come, still I wished it wasn’t true
I always knew
Still I wished it wasn’t true
I always knew


Promise me I’ll still care when I’m older
And maybe I, I’ll carry on
Promise me I’ll still love when I’m older


I always knew
Still I wished it wasn’t true (still I wished it wasn’t true)
I always knew


Still I wished it wasn’t true

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Hi there! I wasn't quite sure what life'd be like without music so I started making my own. 
This is where I share stories, memories and random thoughts. At the end of the day, I suppose we all want to feel connected to everyone else, to feel loved, and to try to love people and things around us. I do it through music, maybe you do too?

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