The creation of this song is definitely not a waste of time! It is soo perfect, great musical job! Bravo!!! 👏🏼

Interesting dark intro to this! I like your voice and the atmosphere you build up. I like the melody in the chorus at 0:55. I do think that this beat could use some elevating near the end, as in some instruments taht get added that add some more intensity  and keep the listener interested. Maybe some strings would work?

Can't leave when we trynna figure this out
Feels cold everytime I try to reach out
Throwing rocks at the window of your first house
Tied up when you told me you would skip town
Both said we wouldn't leave but look at this now
Initials carved in a tree by the school house
Always lost so you ask me what we do now
Baby ain't shit new now so what you wanna do now?

You used to call me every night, now shit confusing
We don't really talk too much, but we'll get through this
If you're not down, then what the hell we doing
My mind gets heavy on the things that you were weighing
Tugging all my heart strings you were playing
I know your better off without me I'm just saying
So girl quit playing, on what I'm saying, my heart be racing

You-ooo-ooo
Trynna waste your time on me, on me
You-ooo-ooo
Shouldn't waste your time on me, on me

Even when I sleep
You sweep me off my feet
I can't think or breath
Cause we're on then off then on again
I feel complete, with you right here with me
But it's something you can't see
Cause we're on then off then on again

Get up, feel stuck, I can't get down
Know you changed, cause you talk a lot of shit now
Baby boy soft spoken, how my shit sound?
Feeling crazy by the way that you just switched round
Been a year, tell ya friends I'm making hits now
Life changes so fast, I feel I missed out
Different city so often I can't sit down
Miss the days where I told you that I'm in route
Baby girl, hard headed, how's this shit sound?
Life was simple till you left me for that new crowd
Love you so much I can't even love myself now
Even love myself now distant from myself now

Even when I sleep
You sweep me off my feet
I can't think or breath
Cause we're on then off then on again
I feel complete, with you right here with me
But it's something you can't see
Cause we're on then off then on again

You-ooo-ooo
Trynna waste your time on me, on me
You-ooo-ooo
Shouldn't waste your time on me, on me

Can't leave when we trynna figure this out
Feels cold everytime I try to reach out
Throwing rocks at the window of your first house
Tied up when you told me you would skip town
Both said we wouldn't leave but look at this now
Initials carved in a tree by the school house
Always lost so you ask me what we do now
Baby ain't shit new now, what you wanna do now?

Stream Here:

https://distrokid.com/hyperfollow/quinnayers/with-love-q-ep-2

(Prod: Adam Haag)

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