Love this.  Vocals are so smooth. The bass part is killer and groove so laid back. Really nice work.

I can see myself cruising listening tot this, I love it.

Man, great production! love this groove! The organ sound is cool but my favorite is this little muted guitar part in the background that comes in here. love this! Excited to listen to your songs this semester!

Love the vocals and harmonies - so nicely blended and so smooth sounding.  Cool track - I like all the rhythmic things you have going on.

I'll add more commentary on my 2nd listen tomorrow, but it's truly lovely to hear you back here again.

As promised, comments on day 2 listening.  Love the subtle change in the production build as the song progresses.  You almost don't notice it, and yet it keeps adding layers.  Lovely density by the end of the song without being mushy or overproduced.  I've always loved your voice, Ray, so that's just a given.

The Bare Minimum
Words and Music by Mark Magram

The Bare Minimum

Here's a song I wrote and played.

You can take one more step
And the road won't be so long
You can wait one more minute
'Til the dark gives way to dawn

You can find one more breath
And say what you need to say
You can take one more step
Then you can make it one more day
If you can take one more step
Then you can make it one more day

It ain't a sprint but a marathon
I ain't ahead but I'm holdin on
When it all gets to be too much
And I feel like I'm losin' touch

I close my eyes and I pray
Gives thanks for another day
Strength just to hold on tight
And get me through another night

One more step
And the road won't be so long
If you can give it one more minute
'Til the dark gives way to dawn

You can find one more breath
Say what you need to say
You can take one more step
Then you can make it one more day
If you can take one more step
Then you can make it one more day

(solo)
(chorus)

One More Day 1159 demo

ATTENTION ALL CARS. This is not Snoop rapping. This me using an Ai cloned voice of Snoop. Snoop as no affiliation with this song. With that being said please don't cancel me. 


Money Money Money Money
Some people got have it
sheeit I’ll do anything to get it
Hate a mufKa one second turnaround and chuck and jive for him in a California minute
I’m Mr. Bow Wow
Bow Down Snoop double g .
I am him and him is me
What choo get is what you see
If the Price is right I’m all you need nigga
Snoop Snoop I can’t believe you changed
Stop crying like Biatch
Man you know the game
Hell I ain’t promise y’all
a got damn thing
Pimp knows pimping
I respect the game cuz
You Mufkas out of pocket
You don’t approve
Acting like you don’t like it
If I offer you a bag
Bet everything I have
Guarantee like me
Turn around and say F it
Cause I’m the H to the Y P
O to the C R
I to the T E
Looking in the mirror
take the thug out the hood
Not the drugs out dealer
Fuck what choo heard
Shit they made me a believer
So pass sack
sit back relax
Puff Puff give
We’ve got lungs to hack
When shit pops off
Martha’s got my back
Sipping on Gin and juice
Laid back
5 6 7 to the 8
It’s me Snoop D
Homey what’s with all this hate ?
There’s money to be had money to be made
Turn my back?
You biatches are inane
So give me the mic and let me bust but like a bubble
Long Beach mar a Lago bitch you know you in trouble
Cause Ain’t nuttin but a weak thang baby
Smoking all this weed made crazy
Donald Trump is the master that pays me
I’m salable so please don’t try and praise me
Back to the problem at hand
Imperfection, I’m a human
Why can't I make you understand?
I ain’t a role model fool
never will never have
Never could have been
West Keys
Yes please
Make America Great Again
ya heard me?
West Keys
Yes please
Make America Great Again
Laid back with my mind on my money 
and my pride in my lap

SOLD TO THE HIGHEST BIDDER_RAY PRIM SONG 3

oh he's gonna take what he wants child
ain't no two ways about it
and if he opens his mouth now
ain't no truth coming out it.
don't know what it is you want but trust me
you ain't gonna get it
don't know what it is you want
don't know what it is you want
if you think that he's thinking about you baby
i promise you he isn't
and if you think that he's thinking bout your babies
i promise you girl you're trippin
don't know what it is you need but trust me
don't know what it is you need but trust me
ALL THE THINGS YOU WANT
ALL THE THINGS YOU LOVE
ALL THE THINGS YOU CHERISH GIRL
ALL THOSE THINGS HAVE GONE
you're love is toxic baby
oooh you're off and on
hey you're holding on to something
deep down you know is wrong
ALL THE THINGS YOU WANT
ALL THE THINGS YOU LOVE
ALL THE THINGS YOU CHERISH GIRL
ALL THOSE THINGS HAVE GONE
ppppick and choose what you want
just no regrets when it hurts.


TOXIC_RAY PRIM

Johnny and Jane Doe
Music and Words by Mark Magram (2025)

(V1)
She wanna stop running
But she can't stop running
Cuz if she stops running
Then the ghosts will get her

He wanna quit using
But he can't quit using
Cuz if he quits using
Then the world comes crumbling down

(Pre)
They’re holding hands like Thelma N Louise
They're going over the edge

(ch)
Johnny and Jane
Don't wanna live with the pain
Don't even leave us a name
Went down in flames
Johnny and Jane
They couldn't handle the game
Now all thats left that remains
Is just some scattered remains
Two lives going down the drain

(V2)
Somebody knew em
But nobody knows who knew em
And they can't find a body
So nobody can confirm that they're gone

(Pre)
They’re holding hands like Thelma N Louise
They're going over the edge

(ch)

(Solo)

Oh Johnny and Jane

(Pre)
They’re holding hands like Thelma N Louise
They're going over the edge

(ch)

Johnny and Jane Doe

When Tomorrow Comes
Music and Words by Mark Magram (2025)

(V1)
I lay awake in bed
With thoughts inside my head
Anticipation building by the hour
I try in vain to rest
I feel it in my chest
I know what will happen when the daylight breaks

(Pre)
These moments will stay with you forever, forever
Tattooed on the fabric of your mind

(Ch1)
When tomorrow comes
Everything changes
I'll be a different person
On a different road
When tomorrow comes
I'll be in a brand new place
Embrace what I have to face
And I'll call this place my home

(V2)
I should be used to change
But it always feels so strange
Everything old gets replaced with new
I’ve been here a time or two
I should know what to do
You never know all the things you don’t know

(Pre)
These moments will stay with you forever, forever
Tattooed on the fabric of your mind

(Ch2)
When tomorrow comes
I might not be ready 
But I have to face what lies ahead
When tomorrow comes
The familiar will fall away
But I know I have to stay the course
And make this my new home

(Br)
Is just where you lay your head
Home is whatever you need it to be
Well I’m headed towards a new horizon
I just have to see where this will go

(Ch1)






When Tomorrow Comes

We Should Live
Music and Words by Mark Magram (2025)

(v1)
Spinning round and round
On a sphere in outer space
Going round the sun
At a slow and steady pace

Do we even try
To make the most of every day
Or just pass the time
Till our existence is erased

(ch)
Soon as we are born we start to die
Underneath a cold uncaring sky
Lightyears pass in every tear we cry
Are we a miracle or are we an accident?

Feasting on a the anger we are fed
Running towards the panic and the dread
Wasting all the space inside our head
When we should live.

(v2)
Almost impossible
Such a freakish cosmic twist
Would bring about the things
That would allow us to exist

How could we fail to see
That every moment is a gift
And how could we let one pass
That isn't happiness and bliss

(ch)
Tiny floating speck of cosmic dust
Carrying the likes of all of us
Only fact of nature we can trust
Is there is an end to it, it isn't infinite

Feasting on the darkness we are fed
Giving into demons in our heads
Worried that the worst will lay ahead
When we should live

(bridge)
Time and space
Is an illusion
There is no conclusion
So much we waste
In trying to know what can't be known

(v3)
Think of a house fly
A lifetime only a few weeks
I wonder what it would say
About this life if it could speak

(ch)
Every breath of oxygen we take
Every single second we're awake
Blind to everything that slips away
Are we just humans being? Here and then gone again?

Told that we will never be enough
If we don't accumulate more stuff
All the time we have were using up
When we should live

We Should Live

The White Mask 5 - The Beatles
Charity Concert Series - August 16, 2020

Guitar & Vocal: Tally Mercury
Violin: Fly

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