When the vocals come in, if I might suggest, you should add a fill or change up the riff a bit so the intro and verses become separate elements (no pun intended). That should make the song a lot more interesting. Rembember, it's the beginning that determines whether someone will listen to the song.

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Elements (The Beginning)

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Elements (The Beginning)

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