@rona-arts  Thank you for the like and repost. You're the BEST!

I love the whispered slurred vocals, makes it more interesting!! Well done man!

oh yeah I definitely got it. it was remarkable story telling. on all 3 songs. I loved the placement of the words you chose to. a couple times I thought you were going to use a different word and surprise! ...I was reading the lyrics and listening at the same time and was literally smiling the whole time at the lyricism! I'm kind of a lyric nerd 🤓

@willvk: From the three or four songs of yours I've listened to so far I think you write great lyrics and are a powerful story teller. Like the song where the girl was angry that someone didn't protect her. Thank you so much for the feedback Will!

verse 1 and 2 were very descriptive of the main character. but verse 4 4 was my favorite! I loved the welfare glare and debts paid scheme!

Floatin' In Space - by Paploviante –– Title & Music; Reidmoto – Lyrics, Final Mix. Note: Vocalist was high, drunk, and shivering, so her vocals are not always clear.

They said the trucks run early when it rains…
You can hear ‘em before dawn — 
the ones that take what’s left.
Ain’t nobody comin’ back for me.

Guess I’m just another story…

Floatin’… in Space.

[Verse 1]
He said, “Sweetheart, you gotta order some food.”
Just doin’ his job, not tryin’ to be rude.
Fishnets torn, mascara rain,
Thunderbird tears runnin’ down the drain.

[Verse 2]
My bag got jacked, only shorts and a tee.
Last trick gone, nobody lookin’ for me.
Dumpster’s warm, the rain hits hard,
Just a night on earth in God’s junkyard.

[Pre-Chorus 1]
The last thing I remembered,
Bones were snappin’, limbs dismembered.
Tried to scream but had no breath,
My fade to black — a trash-truck death.

[Chorus 1]
She appeared in a mist of GLORY,
“I’m the Angel of Purgatory.
Get some rest, I’ll check your story.”
Been EONS since I’ve seen her face,

I’m fluh-fluh-floating in space.

[Verse 3]
I rose above alleys of flickering light,
Past burnt spoons glowing in the night.
The city below was a rosary chain,
Every bead a body whisperin’ my name.

[Verse 4]
I called to the Angel, “Hey, you still there?”
Her halo flickered like welfare glare.
She said, “Baby, I just light the way —
You walk alone till your debts are paid”

[Pre-Chorus 2]
Stars were cryin’, galaxies bled,
Heaven looked blue but it burned out red.
I begged for mercy, but the line went cold.
Just the hum of truth I never told.

[Chorus 2]
She appeared in a mist of GLORY,
“You wrote your own sad story.”
“Rest awhile in this empty place…”
Then she vanished — without a trace.

[Bridge / Spoken Drift]
No wings, no trumpet, no pearly gate,
Just me and the dark and the hands of fate.
Some angels clock out when the sirens wail,
Some souls just ride the garbage rail.

[Final Chorus / Outro]
Been EONS since I’ve seen her face,
I’m fluh-fluh-floating in space.
She ain’t comin’ back — not for grace,
Just driftin’ forever…

floating…
in space.

“Get some rest… I’ll check your story…”
static…
dumpster lid closes…

#1 Timeless Floating In Space - Paploviante_Title_Music-Reidmoto_Lyrics

Promoters of any services: I'm not interested and have a team that handles everything I need. Save your time and your account and DO NOT send me messages praising my music, then hitting me up with your offer. 

ONE MESSAGE FROM ME TO MY CONTACT ON SOUNDCLOUD AND YOU WILL BE BANNED FOR LIFE. 

Now that we've got that straight...

I'm a songwriter and musician, have played in bands, play mostly guitar, and a bit of keyboards, but my primary passion is writing songs--creating cool songs that people can relate to. 

I like to write songs that have meaning and emotional impact, but try to also include some humor in them to make it not so serious and heavy. 

I hope you enjoy some of the songs.

Reidmoto

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