Name: erase again-naviarhaiku557 by rikardfvs in haiku #557: I write, erase, rewrite / erase again, and then / a poppy blooms.
Duration: 6 min 8 s
Description: YT Short: https://youtube.com/shorts/DIaG5yxGTEU?feature=share

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haiku #557: I write, erase, rewrite / erase again, and then / a poppy blooms.

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I write, erase, rewrite
erase again, and then
a poppy blooms.

This is the death poem of Tachibana Hokushi, sometimes wrongly attributed to the Japanese painter Katsushika Hokusai.

Tachibana Hokushi, whose real name was Tachibana Genjiro, was born in Kanazawa in 1665. Hokushi was one of Basho’s most famous students at the time, and he even accompanied the great master during part of his famous journey through the narrow roads of the North, from Kanazawa to Matsuoka.

Haiku by Tachibana Hokushi

To find out more and participate, visit https://www.naviarrecords.com/haiku-music-challenge/

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halF erasurE [naviarhaiku557]

I write, erase, rewrite
erase again, and then
a poppy blooms.

This is the death poem of Tachibana Hokushi, sometimes wrongly attributed to the Japanese painter Katsushika Hokusai.

Tachibana Hokushi, whose real name was Tachibana Genjiro, was born in Kanazawa in 1665. Hokushi was one of Basho’s most famous students at the time, and he even accompanied the great master during part of his famous journey through the narrow roads of the North, from Kanazawa to Matsuoka.

Haiku by Tachibana Hokushi

Picture by Pawel Czerwinski

A Poppy Blooms (Naviarhaiku557)

This track was created for the Naviar Haiku group.
557

https://www.naviarrecords.com/naviarhaiku557-i-write-erase-rewrite/

2024-09-05

I Write, Erase, Rewrite ( Naviarhaiku 557 )

A track made for the Naviar haiku challenge #557 https://www.naviarrecords.com/naviarhaiku557-i-write-erase-rewrite/

Early-morning improvisation on a Roland JX-3P.

write, erase, rewrite

Write, Erase, Rewrite (naviarhaiku557)

5Sep24

My naviarhaiku557 track
https://naviarlab.tumblr.com/post/760695231362596864/naviarhaiku557-i-write-erase-rewrite
:D

I write, erase, rewrite [naviarhaiku557]

YT Short: https://youtube.com/shorts/DIaG5yxGTEU?feature=share

erase again-naviarhaiku557

starlink

"There is in certain living souls a quality of loneliness unspeakable, so great it must be shared as company is shared by lesser beings. Such a loneliness is mine; so know by this that in immensity there is one lonelier than you." Theodore Sturgeon (1918-1985)

abandoned

TRANSMISSIONS   ZX -  6      -     2024

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Last Days * Instrumental

More on the 668th weekly Disquiet Junto project, All Right Then, Keep Your Secrets — The Assignment: Bury a secret sound until it is no longer identifiable — at https://disquiet.com/0668/

This project was proposed by Mahlen Morris.

halF secrecY [disquiet0668]

Have U tried to light the pyre
floatin in the tide
salt water on ur thigh
notch an arrow,... caught tight in the catgut string
waitin on the headwinds to draw and fly
waitin on the headwinds to take my arrows wide
and I offered myself to the tell all crowds
keeping secrets (right out loud)
yea my lips unveil true meanings
censored bits to be intentional
but I need a better cleaning...
so I'm headed to the confessional
yea, so bless me father, gonna make me a sinner
float me on a funeral pyre
burn me in the timber
I'll sing for the choir
lookin dead...but I'm just tired of the shit that's being said
yayaya blablablaaaa
I would be ashamed if my mouth
was free ranging...sayin what I want
when I want...and y'all be damned
put it on blast and now y'all be spammed
and like a midnight crawler
I'll take every last dollar...wait,
didn't I hear 'bout a prophet throwin
crooked men out on their ear
ur god or ur god or ur god
are they all brethren...or the tip, of the spear
and have U tried to light a pyre
floatin in high tide
salt water on my thigh
I notch an arrow, caught tight in the catgut string
waitin on the headwinds to draw back and let fly
just waitin on the headwinds
takes my arrows wide

Burn Me In The Timber

i loved to use this sample even if  others made it famous....

way to a star

Naviar is a music community and label. Through regular publications, open projects and events, we explore the connection between experimental music and traditional Japanese poetry.

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