Like the lead guitar sound and lines, nice job!!

Critical Bug

The pale moon which illuminates,
the characters upon the lake.
The quiet shades of evening on your bag.
The nodding of the loonies, who are walking out their pooches.
Just a-spoiling for a moment to be sad.

The day you die, the manuscript, the boiler plate, the sullen crypt. 
The consequences add up to a nag.
Oh, daughter of humanity, will you hold off the cads for me? 
I only want to look into your hands.

I'm only saying stuff to see. 
To speak.
I'm hardly buying what you seek.
Too deep? 

A defecating effigy of vegetating ecstasy. 
Which sits above, in judgement on the mad.
A devastated copse of trees, requiring its worker bees. 
To make the switch from honey t'ward the jam.

And there is not a potion made, which won't require trust to take. 
They take, to take, a taker of the tack.
Oh, tochter aus... isocoles! 
The ravages! the fenugreek!?
The dealers only dealing with the lags.

I'm only trying to replace. 
Two faced.
I'm only trying to be safe. 
In space. 

See, if I give you the best of me.
You'd never taste the rest of me. 
The value added, plastic tang of love.
Oh, yeah, happy is the wooing that's-a not-a long-a doing.
They will never want for anything. Harrumph!

All as above, is as below. 
You only trust the ones you know. 
The pages turn the wheels on the tram.
Oh, daughter of humanity, can you placate your dad for me?
A self-absorbed philately of cats.

I'm only trying to negate. 
Create.
I'm only wanting to save face. 
Too late?

Well, if I can not count your sheep.
How'm I supposed to get to sleep? 
There's only so much begging for a shag.
The nighttime rolls around you so, can't get in through the windows, though.
Why d'you hold my fortune in your hands?

The bitter queen is sent away.
Mary's mother blown away. 
A man must do his best to say he'd had.
Oh, tochter aus... personify!
Freude! shöne! gotterfrei! 
Who will pass the salt to save the sad?
Who will pass the salt to save the sad?

Mixed and Mastered by Woods Studio Norway.


Daughter of Humanity [Woods Studio Norway Mix]

ALBUM:https://soundcloud.com/candented/sets/random-probability-spaces
Musice Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fQX24xbIiMU
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n. the realization that each random passerby is living a life as vivid and complex as your own—populated with their own ambitions, friends, routines, worries and inherited craziness—an epic story that continues invisibly around you like an anthill sprawling deep underground, with elaborate passageways to thousands of other lives that you’ll never know existed, in which you might appear only once, as an extra sipping coffee in the background, as a blur of traffic passing on the highway, as a lighted window at dusk.

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I made a Golden Birthday video for a Granddaughter, and this is the audio from it.

Happy Birthday - Ron Snyder COVER (FREE DOWNLOAD)

For the Weekend Warriors
Lyrics - J Giordano
Production/Mixing/Mastering/Engineer - Zer0
Stream the Official Track: http://ww.5nine3.com
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Verse 1:
It's Friday night and the drinks are flowin'
Folks gettin' tipsy, their mouths start goin'
Sayin' things that don't make a lick of sense
Like "I swear I'm sober" and "I'm not that dense"

Chorus:
Oh the weekend warriors are out tonight
Gettin' sloshed and startin' fights
Liquid courage fuelin' their beer muscles
Actin' the fool like a bunch of knuckleheads

Verse 2:
"I can outdrink anyone!" slurs Jim with a grin
As he stumbles and spills his whiskey and gin
"I'm not even drunk!" claims Sue as she falls
While Bob mumbles something 'bout his truck and his dog
(Break)

Chorus:
Oh the weekend warriors are out tonight
Gettin' sloshed and startin' fights
Liquid courage fuelin' their beer muscles
Actin' the fool like a bunch of knuckleheads

Extended chorus from the dance floor to the parking lot
Their drunken antics just can't be stopped
Makin' bad decisions they'll surely regret
When the hangover hits and they're all in debt

Oh the weekend warriors went hard last night
Now they're payin' the price for their party life
But you know they'll do it all again next week
'Cause a cold one with the boys is all they seek

For the Weekend Warriors

Annie Dieu-Le-Veut did a fantastic narration of "True Thomas" and I set this to music: 
https://soundcloud.com/annie-dieu-le-veut/true-thomas-and-the-queen-of-elfland

As "musical director" (-ehemm-) I revisited the track and determined a few spots where the music could breath a little more, eventually increasing the soundscape feelings. This resulted in two increasingly 'extended' versions. This is the final one -- now valid over at Annie's too ... ;-)

True Thomas extended

All Songs by me (Written, Performed, Ruined, Resuscitated, Mixed, Re-recorded, Abandoned and all other possibilities).  Special thanks to Dani Ford, Kahlan Davis, John Moreland, and the Toxic Brothers.

Art by Amrulqays Maarof (PixaBay)

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