Really lovely! Great words and dreamy magical guitars

It's excellent .... Music and voice, are still here, in unison.

This is a very good song and collaboration!!

Your words are Very moving, the music fits perfectly...beautiful

Very beautiful, sweet and relaxing, lovely voice !!

Another collaboration with Jazzdefector. He posted years ago but I decided to post here too.

@jazzdefector

My heart so longs to love 
I can feel it in my body as intensely as in my heart
I want to share its fervor
To culminate in your ecstasy
 
I can give so much
I have so much 
To offer
But it wasn't and is not what you need 
What I have doesn't make up what for I can't give 
For what I lack
For what I have taken
 
I love to love and to be loved but we speak different languages
You can't feel mine and I can't feel yours
We strive and fail
My weakness seems to you betrayal
Why can't I express it in a way you can understand
Why must I be tortured inside by these feelings that seem locked within
 
Ours has been abandoned 
Forsaken
Reasons you tore away I can understand
So many of my provisions to you an empty hand
The sweetest gifts became bland
 
I want to share
I want to see your smile again, to unite our bodies with all our passion
Love's ultimate manifestation 
Be we are disparate, so far away
Distant hearts leave bodies cold
Emotions dying 
As embers left alone

Distant Love with Jazzdefector

I hope you feel it, I hope you feel yourself...

Lets collaborate! Words are powerful but music takes them to a whole other dimension. I'd really like to combine words and music. Please message me if you would like to work together. I can share works or write new ones based on others' ideas. I invite others to read my works as well. 

 


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